All Comments on 'Summer Storm'

by Publius68

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WillC2020WillC2020over 1 year ago

Even if not 100% accurate scientifically, the flashing lightening and crashing thunder is a helluva backdrop for escalating passion. I could almost — but thankfully not quite — visualize his growing erection becoming a metaphorical lightening rod, sizzling them both for their sin of passion before formally exchanging first names. Good story!

TheTvProfTheTvProfover 1 year ago

A joyous romp and quick read. Reminds me of Lou Christie's song, Rhapsody In The Rain.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A bit of sexy red chest hair for Sean's sexy body would be a great treat for Cassie! Please write more! This is a great story!

SimonBrookeSimonBrookeover 1 year ago

That was hot.

And wet.

And actually funny.

rayironyrayironyover 1 year ago
Unequivocal

approval Sir Publius !!

Thom_the_gleemanThom_the_gleemanover 1 year ago

Marvelously well written story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, but I kept waiting for an alligator to appear.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Liked it but there was too much focus on her bra and boobs at the start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amusing and erotic, also well written with very few errors (stripping not striping). Thanks.

Probus888Probus888over 1 year ago

Great story - never been that close to a lightning strike myself and don't want to be - even with sex thrown in. Well written with a likeable character in Cassie.

MarassoMarassoover 1 year ago

Hah, that was really fun reading and a hot story too! Written so vividly that I almost felt that rain over my skin. Thank you, five stars!

ActingupActingupover 1 year ago

I’m a professional tropical meteorologist, and I endorse this story - except for them sheltering under a steel structure with all that lightning, which had me a little too much on edge! For the sequel, perhaps you could trap them in a blizzard? Much safer. 5 stars.

clearlyenigmaticclearlyenigmaticover 1 year ago

A great example of how entertaining erotica can be. I hope to read more of Cassie's adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I know this was a one off. But this story could use an encore.

DenaliFXDenaliFXover 1 year ago

I WISH I WERE THERE IN THE RAIN, IN MY EYES, KNEES HURTING, EVERYTHING. YOU ARE INCREDIBLY GOOD AT THE FLIRTATION-LIKE DIALOG AND THE SENSUAL HEAT OF THE PASSIONATE EVENTS - ALL KINDS. WOW! WHAT A SKILL. WE ALL SHOULD BE CELEBRATING YOU. 10 OUT OF 5 - YOU DESERVE MILLIONS FOR THIS WORK. I HOPE YOU CAN TELL THAT I LIKE THIS!!!

OpenToOpenMindedOpenToOpenMinded6 months ago

Sorry but I felt this one could use more beginning, middle and end so I just comment and not rate.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Wowza.

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