by Publius68
Even if not 100% accurate scientifically, the flashing lightening and crashing thunder is a helluva backdrop for escalating passion. I could almost — but thankfully not quite — visualize his growing erection becoming a metaphorical lightening rod, sizzling them both for their sin of passion before formally exchanging first names. Good story!
A joyous romp and quick read. Reminds me of Lou Christie's song, Rhapsody In The Rain.
A bit of sexy red chest hair for Sean's sexy body would be a great treat for Cassie! Please write more! This is a great story!
Amusing and erotic, also well written with very few errors (stripping not striping). Thanks.
Great story - never been that close to a lightning strike myself and don't want to be - even with sex thrown in. Well written with a likeable character in Cassie.
Hah, that was really fun reading and a hot story too! Written so vividly that I almost felt that rain over my skin. Thank you, five stars!
I’m a professional tropical meteorologist, and I endorse this story - except for them sheltering under a steel structure with all that lightning, which had me a little too much on edge! For the sequel, perhaps you could trap them in a blizzard? Much safer. 5 stars.
A great example of how entertaining erotica can be. I hope to read more of Cassie's adventures.
I WISH I WERE THERE IN THE RAIN, IN MY EYES, KNEES HURTING, EVERYTHING. YOU ARE INCREDIBLY GOOD AT THE FLIRTATION-LIKE DIALOG AND THE SENSUAL HEAT OF THE PASSIONATE EVENTS - ALL KINDS. WOW! WHAT A SKILL. WE ALL SHOULD BE CELEBRATING YOU. 10 OUT OF 5 - YOU DESERVE MILLIONS FOR THIS WORK. I HOPE YOU CAN TELL THAT I LIKE THIS!!!
Sorry but I felt this one could use more beginning, middle and end so I just comment and not rate.