All Comments on 'Summer Suspicions Ch. 06'

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StarBenStarBenalmost 12 years ago
nice!

keep em coming! love the story so far.will the dad join in the future?

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

great story so far. I really like the added romance of Luke and Lacy. Keep it going with those two. Just DO NOT add the dad to the story. That would completely ruin the whole story.

Keep up the good work!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic

I am really pulling for Luke and Lacy having a real relationship and falling in love with each other. It would work out perfectly for mom if they did get married after Luke finished school.That way Lacy and mom could share Luke along with Lisa when she was at home.

I think keeping dad in the dark about the relationship Luke is having with his mom and his sister Lisa. It would complicate everything having him fucking the girls too. Luke deserves to have them all to himself.

I'm still wanting to see Luke make his mom pregnant, and his dad is OK with it, with him knowing all along what has been going on, and glad that his wife is getting the sexual release she deserves,since he can't knock her up anymore or keep her sexually satisfied.

What ever happens I'm sure it will be very erotic and exciting.

Thanks for the good read.

kaidmankaidmanalmost 12 years ago
dynamite

you keep raising the bar can't wait to see the next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Indeed keep the stories coming... Glad the story didn't take that same old turn of guy getting finger in ass... then toy... then girl gets boyfriend and guy takes boyfriend in ass as well.. lol. Keeping dad in the dark seems logical. wouldn't go along with the current character developments to all of a sudden just let dad start fucking the girls... unless he already has been fucking them... as he always seems to be asleep. Spoiler alert? dad is on the patch too? I do agree that luke should get the girl... but maybe make him work for it...[maybe a spin off from dad's point of view... maybe dad pulled a luke and figured out the patches. how to stop them... and is using that information to fuck the girls during the day.yada yada yada...] the faster luke and lacy get together the faster the story is over... the faster they drift apart(lacy gets new love intrest) possibly people lose intrest. .. :/ Regardless amazing read that has me checking back daily for the next chapter. Hopefully the wait wont be too long. no matter what you're doing an amazing job and keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Riiiight

Lacy gets training for the butt fucking, and our hero is expected to just let them stick a large toy up his ass?

the author MUST be a woman, No way a man would write it that way

AmbivalenceAmbivalencealmost 10 years ago
You know, I WAS reading this story...

but when the main make character acts like he isn't a pussy, and in his head doesn't talk like a pussy, but then let's his sister and mother TREAT him like a pussy...

Well, no sense in reading a story that I can't even remotely believe when it is supposed to BE a story that could be believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Hell, sister trying to force the issue with the vibrator up the ass would have pissed me off too! I don't think I would trust her further than I could throw her, I'd be off to the hardware store in the morning to buy a deadbolt for my door, in the meantime jam a chair under the doorknob!

...she happily rides his dick but doesnt want a kiss? Rofl.

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