All Comments on 'Summer Vacation'

It's been a long time since I have seen new words from you so thank you. This story screams for a second chapter. Please don't disappoint your readers.

I agree that you should write another chapter. I have always enjoyed your stories. THANKS

I hope there's a Chapter 2

Loved the character interaction. Great details. Please continue what got wet read. Wow

Good to read something from you again like your older stories. A continuation would no doubt be well received.

well told.

When will we read about Angel?

The start was a touch awkward although I understand it's a stream of consciousness writing. However after Julie the story picked up and the interest and intensity of memories become more visible.

Thank you.

It calls for a sequel. How did Dan get on with Angie and what did Mary think of it? Did Julie come back? Looking forward to more writing.

The story has a fine continuity and there is nothing like an older woman to form a mutual admiration society.....

Pleasant reading with a touch of naivety that adds to its charm. You need to get an editor to remove the grammar errors that stop the flow ("my pelvic") and I'm a little worried to see you think the clit has an opening !

Thanks and keep writing

Thanks for sharing.

Let's hear about Angel! Don't make us wait.

So many readers are asking me for a sequel. I need a little time to write it and have a few surprises and make the story worth reading. Please bare with me while I give it some more thought. Thanks to everyone who read and commented on my story. It really is much appreciated.

DG Hear

I just read your comment on a second (at least) chapter. Have been reading you for long time--you always out a lot of soul in your work - an willing to wait --patience is not my long suit lol

Grat story as ever, please write a sequel

Oh that i would of had a growing up like the story alludes to.

Please continue the wonderful story telling D G Hear I have read your previous works and loved them.

tactfully done

the joys of sex by an older women...they are the best teachers...never play games like the young teen girls do and always always come back for more and love it...my best memories of having it off with older women they were the best lovers ever....would have liked to know if he ever got off with Angel and they became lovers and even married...

Was a good read could do with a story about angel

Where is the next bit?.