All Comments on 'Summer Vacation'

Great story, well written. Wished it was multi-chapter though. The possibilities were endless!

much enjoyed.....thank you

... glad to see you are back writing. Have missed you. Well done, wish it would continue with Michael and Karyn and the women of the church.

Liked the story, but it did leave me wondering about a couple of things.

Did the reverend, who was such a jerk, suddenly turn into mister nice guy when Jeanette became pregnant? And did Karyn and Jeanette continued their affair?

Totally predictable

Well done. I thought for sure our hero would be playing with his Aunt. Possibly his next summer vacation?

Thanks Don

A good, well written tale. I loved it.

Anything by Ann Douglas!

So hot to stumble in on the two les lovers, and the plot twists after that were both ho and inventive. High marks, Ann!

Real hot! Also the pregnancy …