All Comments on 'Summer Vacation Ch. 04'
by mustbeyou106
- 14 Comments
Anonymousabout 18 years agoYOU DIDN'T MISS A BEAT . FANTASTIC JOB OF KEEPING THE STORY ALIVE AT EVERY TURN .YOU WERE RIGHT ON THE MONEY FOR CREDABILITY .NICE JOB .
Anonymousabout 18 years agoGreat just like the other 3 before it; hope you don't stop writing more.
lipkissabout 18 years agoI got real hard reading your story. I hope you will write more. Feel free to e-mail me if you wish. I love to get mail.
David48almost 18 years agoThere is nothing better than seeing the wonders of sex through young, fresh, inexperienced eyes. Everything is new and completely mind-blowing. Those fantastic new feelings just keep on cuming. It was the very best time of my life, learning, and experiencing the joys of wringing out the most pleasure from my body, and then having the even more wonderous experience of finally giving it back to a lover. It is what makes being a frail human completely worth it all. I hope there is alot more to this amazingly hot tale...
thesadwriterover 17 years agoVery nice and detailed! Short and to the point, but not rushed. Great end also! Like a clssic porn film on paper! I haven't written here in 5 years or more and I know how busy life can keep us; but I know you have some new stories just brewing in you. Let's have em already!!:)
oldwayneabout 16 years agoI really liked your series. It seemed very true to life. Perhaps it was autobiographical??? Give us more, please!
ChevMan69about 16 years agoYou mastered the art of two young lovers finding their way toward the pleasures of man and woman. All four chapters are very well done and exciting to read about. Just wish you had not stopped as the summer is young. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your art.
ChevMan69about 16 years agoYou mastered the art of two young lovers finding their way toward the pleasures of man and woman. All four chapters are very well done and exciting to read about. Just wish you had not stopped as the summer is young. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your art.
Anonymousabout 16 years agogreat job I just wish that you kept it going it was soooo hot.
Jim
Anonymousover 13 years agoAll four chapters where amazing, I loved the story! So brilliantly detailed also, good job. Please don't stop writing!
arrowglassover 10 years agoGAWD I loved this...incredibly HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!! The way you describe everything in such sensual detail...just can't get enough of this one!!!!
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