All Comments on 'Summer Vacation with My Wife's Family'

More,but maybe slow the pace a bit with more of the juicy details!

Don't take this the wrong way... I loved the story - Really! Keep Writing Please!

However the ONLY thing that kept you from getting 5 stars was that its a little too short & lacking some details.

NOT saying you had to fk all the girls in the first chapter or anything, just that a bit more 'time' spent w/ mom before the girls got home would have been nice.

Liked the story up until the final two paragraphs, then it died. Update chapter one and add a second page dealing with how Mom was satisfied. Take your time developing the scenes,don"t rush the "climax", and make sure ALL participants are happy and feeling good. You have at least two sisters and a wife to include in the festivities, plus any other combinations you care to explore. Plenty of chance to make the effort to create a great story..

I liked the story, but like the others I felt like I was left hanging. There are so may places that this could go. More details for sure, especially the sex with the MIL. Subsequent chapters could detail sex with the other two sisters too. You have been denied for three weeks and the sex should be almost explosive. This just wasn't enough ....."I spent the rest of the day inside Karen as much as possible,"

Detail it!

You started out GREAT and then died. Need to ad more foreplay to the story and then many more chapter with the wife and her sisters. This could develope into g GREAT multi chapter saga.

Next chapter?

Where is the next chapter?

And the next chapter?

What fun.. Keep going!

That’s not a story, that’s a *summary* of a story.

wow,great story starting,its said mother knows best so im glad she got firsts,hopefully all the girls get one on one time and then maybe an orgy with all!!