All Comments on 'Summer Visit Ch. 11'

I have five cousins that I have lusted after, so cousin incest is my favorite topic and this is perhaps the very best cousin story I have found. (Please point me to any other exceptional cousin stories.) The slow build up and pace in this story are exquisite The characters are sympathetic and well written. Great job!

With every chapter this story draws the reader in, wanting more, hoping that the two find nirvana, a blissful happily ever after,, Well done 5 + stars

Such amazingly sweet tender sex and beautifully and erotically narrated, annotating each sensation and reactions of both Matthew and Cayley. It was a real turn on, especially since this exact moment had been so carefully cultivated, building the reader’s desire. We knew before this chapter how deeply they cared for each other and all the previous chapters and experiences were like fore play preparing for this moment. To experience it in his dream and then recreate it when awake allowed the sex to last from start to climactic ending. Really a brilliant piece of writing!