All Comments on 'Summer Visit Ch. 12'

Wow what a fantastic story, great series, well paced and nice sexy details with some romance mixed in. I do hope we get to read more of this lovely couple. I do hope they will end up together somehow because they just seem so right for each other.

I really enjoyed this whole story line. I know I may be in the minority here, especially on this site, definitely because of the genr

Well, my lasting comment was incomplete...

I loved the whole story. I wasn't excited about him feeling as if it was an altruistic notion to "let" her have boyfriends/girlfriends after the summer was over. I get that having freewheeling, consequence free sex is a big thing in the world today, and especially on this site, particularly in this genre, but there are times when a story calls for some possessiveness. I don't think it would have been a bad thing if Matt just said he wanted Caylee exclusively. No other relationships. For me, I was disappointed that he was fine with it. There is room for exclusivity in these types of stories, isn't there? I don't want to come off as parochial, because I'm not, this story, with as long as Caylee has pined for Matt, to just be ok with that? Just because she's had great sex, she needs to chase every experience available? I see her, in my mind's eye, deciding that she's going to love Matt, and not feel guilty for it, and not chase others. God, if I was him, and had someone chase me down like she did, I'd be a frighin' idiot to just let her go. It may be titillating to imagine her with his sister's girlfriend, but, really, I would hope she'd love him, and only him.

Great story.

Well this was a 5 star love story until it stopped without the summer even ending. Now it the author doesn't finish this wonderful love story then it is a tragedy. So many questions, what happens when her parents return, will they let Caylee go live with her Aunt and Uncle, what will become of the relationship between Caylee and Matt, will it survive her last year of High School, will it survive her university years, will Caylee and Matts love be strong enough to endure enough to have that happily ever after. This love story has so many possibilities. Well Done to this point qchickie. 5 stars if you finish it.

After thinking about this story I want to change my comment just a little.

Well this was a 5 star love story, one of the better ones I have read her on Lit, hopefully we will see more chapters soon. So many questions yet to be answered, what happens when her parents return, will they let Caylee go live with her Aunt and Uncle, what will become of the relationship between Caylee and Matt, will it survive her last year of High School, will it survive her university years, will Caylee and Matts love be strong enough to endure the hurdles of life enough to have that happily ever after. This love story has so many possibilities. Well Done qchickie. 5 stars

Amazing story

It's been over a year and no new chapters but I'm good. It was an awesome story and every new page kept me anticipating where we went next.