All Comments on 'Summer with Carly Pt. 02'

Very good story. I can't wait for part 3 !!!

Good smooth story. Well pace and sexy. Writing shows you took your time and gave it some thought. Keep up the good work. Enjoyed it a lot.

Hmm, wonder where this is going. Either way I look forward to reading it.

I hope part 3 will come soon!

Mom knows. Mom approves. Mom will make sure Carly hasn’t missed a day of her pill. She’ll leave condoms available for her nephew. The kids will be scared and shocked at her tacit, secret blessings.

Then, you have to decide where to take this. Mom/Aunt will either arrange for Dad/Uncle to be gone (fishing or hunting), or she will take the kids for a Day Trip somewhere. Maybe a Fair with an overnight stay at a hotel.

My guess is, you’ll have them lose their virginity without Mom/Aunty’s direct supervision. But after that? Will the kids want to “thank” her? Will she want a taste of her nephew after seeing his cock? Will she avoid “cheating” by not kissing and using “God’s Loophole”? Obviously, I’ve fantasized taking your sweet Summer of Cousin Love and Sexploration Story to a much kinkier and fantastic place.

It will take two years or more to see Chapter 3. Mom/Aunt has been a cipher in this story. You have no plans to involve her. This is a sweet and funny, innocent incest story. It would take you 12 years to take your story to where I’m going.

But I just figured out Mom’s motivation! The Day Trip isn’t to a Fair. It will be to a Family Funeral (on Mom’s side of the Family), where they will all stay at Mom’s Male Cousin’s Apartment! But, you won’t get to that chapter for at least nine years! Ha!

I sat here and tried to not LOL but I almost lost it .. others sleeping right above my room. OMG.. the story and writing was incredible. Please don't take long to write the next chapter as I'm OLD!!! HAHAHAHA

This story is crazy hot, and I'm dying to hear more of the adventures of Carly and Jake!

-Anubelore

Great chapter two, worthy of the five stars I gave it. Hoping like Hell we don't have to wait another 4 Years for another.

Great writing