All Comments on 'Summer with My Stepsister Pt. 02'

Take your time and give it a good proof reading before submitting.

Please write more, I love it!

It's hard to proofread the heck out of these stories and still not miss some errors. I like where this is going. If it's true, maybe you ought to post that info about it? Because a lot of us would like to know?

Thank you for posting this story, I thought it was great; and ignore the Anonymous trolls from your last posting.

You end your stories abruptly with unnatural endings. This one just stopped with the girls with fun on their faces. No comments or reactions of actions. Not a good way to finish.

The endings are a little short,but for the overall story its exciting,Danny,Val,and Melissa seem like fun wild characters.I think they should rid Danny of his virginity,especially Val,she should get to take his cherry first since she is his sister,albeit stepsister but she is more deserving than Mel is.Keep'um coming icarus.

Like others said it was way to short. I thought it was a very good story and I would definitely love to see more.

This story has a lot of potential, definitely needs to continue.

Good so far, although I'm not into facials.

So far, to me the story is more of a prelude to the main story, rather than a full story in itself. It's been more than 5 months, and I'm still waiting for the rest of the story.

Needs a pt 3 continuing the story

Was a good story, but it now drops into the unfinished story category. Why can't authors finish what they start.

Its only a 3 if you don't finish the story.