All Comments on 'Summer: Your Sweetest Sin'

boring and bland. been written a bunch of times just with slightly different variations. Not really that sexy, Kinda boring.

mmmm princess such a lovely work!

Good start. Almost got there.

Thank you for your comments it was a long process trying to get a story published online but it's something I wanted to try to do. I know it may not be to everyone's taste and it's had to be rewritten and even slightly dulled down to pass criteria but it's a first effort and hopefully from here I can gain confidence and try to write a series of adventures for Summer based partly on the reality I have experienced as part of lockdown. For those that have rated it thank you I hope you get to enjoy more of my writing for those who thought it kind of boring I'll attempt to write something better. Again thank you for reading my story I am proud I finally managed to get it published online. Little achievements make us grow as people.

mmm try to take all the negative comments as a little boost to make your writing better and better and prove them all wrong when you will climbing to the top my Summer

Hope there's another chapter soon.

Looks like a very immature writing style, but I know it was your best effort. Perhaps go toward lesbian tales, we suspect you prefer girls anyway?

That was bad. You are not a good writer. Better be a cheap slut, suits you better.