by mypenname3000
Nice to see you've updated your stories and removed the underage participants from when they were on asstr.org....
Very, as in very, imaginative. High marks, too, for developing/conjuring her appearance not to mention performance! Very creative.
I'm sure you've heard of run-on sentences... it'll seriously throw off a story...
You're not guilty of that...
But you do tend to the other direction... a lot of short sentences... surprisingly, that also throws off the story...
Otherwise, enjoyed the story...
Holy fuck, I was just thinking that it would be a possession incest story, but the fact that it's his actual mother makes it much better
Such a story...I love it!! Mommy is gonna drain him sssooo often...filling all her holes, and eventually putting a baby into her! So nasty...!!!
The title kinda gave it away...still, was a surprise how mom was just drawn back from her book club meeting like that!! The spell was really strong for that to happen!!
Five**5**Stars...and on to Chapter 2 now!!
This was so erotic. I had to read it very very slow, because I wanted to experience the intense sexual bliss that this sexy succubus mommy and her lucky son were experiencing. Throughout the reading, I imagined my Mom as the black haired succubus beauty. I am hooked. 5 Stars.
Good start. Obviously knew who was coming and worked well. To my mind too much sex in this but perhaps that's the initial summoning and perhaps we'll get more filling out later.