by mypenname3000
The placeholder names are a little distracting; prof reagent the chemistry teacher, prof hemlock who is certainly not a witch, etc. Funny in abstract, but takes you out of the story in the moment
As much as I love the idea of this story, the racial epithets and the gross stereotypes are really taking away more than they are adding.
Man this is good but i hope the next episode i read theres a bit of love not the motherly love but as a woman it's not as hot and theyre not true to their feelings it's just bloodline awakening though good writing though
So this is very hot and I love the foreshadowing about Mrs. Hemlock being a witch. There is one thing that keeps bothering me though. Your "college" feels a lot like high school. If you don't know what college life is like that is cool but just make everything take place in a high school. Something to think about in the future maybe? I certainly don't expect you to change something you've already finished.
(6/6/2022) This is my first supernatural read on this website. I tend to avoid them but figured I give this a shot. I'm not disappointed. This story is hot, kinky, and also funny. I'm half expecting him to wake up some Saturday morning by the sound of his mom collecting his laundry and realizing it was all a dream. But I hope not. I hope we get to find out what really happened to his father. I don't see how he could have gotten tired of his Succubus. I do love harems. I've given each chapter 5 stars, so far. Oh..., and I believe I know who the witch is.
Good story, but too much of an audience and not enough audience participation. I'll still rate it a 4.
Yep, "Mrs Hemlock" is a witch...I suspected something was up when she collected a vial of Henry's spooge!! And, she seemed much more 'tuned into' him in class and after, when she 'took' him...she was too creepy, not like the girls, who just wanted his dick!!
Public fucking...in the college lunch room...girls want him, guys think he is a stud...what a life...and Momma doing ALL those nasty things to/for him...fantasy...yes, but WHAT a fantasy...
Five stars...has to be...next stop...History Class!!
"Do you hear how you're talking?" Izolde asked, her purple hair spilling around her face. "He doesn't want a slut. He wants a girl that respects herself. Henry, I'll let you do anal. Anal! That's how much I respect myself!"
When you're giving what you get, that's what I call respect.
Переборщили с всеобщим гипнозом) А так очень неплохо. Правда, хотелось чтобы парень был мужчиной, а не слабым ребенком, которым все командуют