All Comments on 'Summoning the Succubi Pt. 04'

"Suddenly out of nowhere RANDY ORTON, RKO!! Just kidding."

... Really?

Well, seeing as you've gotten to part four, I think you've spent roughly 20-30 minutes on my series at least, so thanks for the support. Also, humor levels breaching 9000.

proper nouns, (names), are capitalized. ie: bill gates >> Bill Gates, pay pal >> Pay Pal.

On another note, based on some of your unusual word choices and structuring, is English your native language?

I like where you're going with this but please make the chapters longer if possible

Thank you