All Comments on 'Sun Salutations'

That was fucking hot.... Thank you...

This is an incredibly hot story.

Your stories are always fantastic! Thank You!

Lots of nudity and a positive outlook towards sex. Another great story. Thanks and keep writing.

"I'm not a prude but I don't know about being naked in front of strangers," Sofia responded to the invitation.

We already know she's responding to the invitation, you don't have to type it out. Just say, "Sofia responded."

"I think you are very beautiful in your natural state," Sofia commented not knowing what made her so attractive to her.

Too wordy and awkward sounding. Again, just say "Sofia commented."

Other than a few more awkward sounding parts like that, good story. :-)

politics and porn don't mix

story-wise, twice missed opportunities to have sex in the shower.

Only one thought, isn't she supposed to get pregnant in a fertility ceremony?

The anonymous "too wordy" comment is right on. This story is stiffly-written and overstates the obvious, while lacking emotion.

Although this was a very good story, I agree with the others about it lacking emotion.

All your stories have a common feeling of uncompleteness, of something missing or left behind.