All Comments on 'Sunday Morning'

by pollyplummer

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FluidswallowerFluidswallowerabout 3 years ago

Very well-written, extremely sensual. women write about sex, especially between to women, so very well. I love as woman well-satisfied by another and have always tried to satisfy any woman I have been with in those ways. (I'm a man)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Very sexy is a great story😘

lesbearlesbearalmost 6 years ago
I feel sad for the narrator

She's in love with her visitor but won't tell her.

polynicespolynicesalmost 6 years ago
A good story

Very well written, as usual. I don't know whether it's fiction or autobiography, of course, but the highly detailed description feels very real. Thank you yet again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lovely

This is just about perfect! I love the feelings the relationship and the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful

I love your writing style! Great descriptions!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Nice sexy story.

And to anon, lying or laying, who cares?

And since you want to be the grammar police, you made a mistake too. It's supposed to be 'is' not 'id'.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Eggs?

Well written until you spoiled it with "It felt good to have her laying on top".

What was she laying? Eggs?

The word id 'lying'

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