All Comments on 'Sunday Race'

How can you write from the point-of-view of multiple people at the same time? How do you know the inner-most thoughts of a person and include those from multiple people? The situation cannot exist in the way described.

Very sexy and erotic but I couldn't do it. I would be afraid I wouldn't "measure up" and sex would just not be the same. Let alone fear of an STD.

But a great fantasy for sure.

I am writing in third person, from the view point of everyone in the story.

When I first started putting stories on this site I was told to write in third person

so I did. You have your opinion.

It is just fantasy, fiction. Thank you for your comment.

It's call Third Person Omniscient. If the writer focuses on one, main character, it's called Third Person Limited Omniscient. Either way, they most definitely exist.

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So, yeah, tedsgirl is right and you aren't.

I liked the story, husband watching wife take two. Part I found hard to believe was two black guys watching NASCAR, I mean come on now. That and the other one works.

I have had black friends who like NASCAR, it's not impossible.