by gapster7
Very nicely written. Just one thought, will Sarah be appreciative of his new skills or will she be overwhelmingly upset and jealous? Thank you for sharing this great story!
What a waste of time to read a story so badly written. Even a bigger waste of time for the author to write a story like Sunday sessions.
You need a follow up regarding his new connection with Sarah and what he learned from Miley
A very yummy story indeed! I would hope that you bring them back again to get them deeper involved. Thank you!
I enjoyed you flipping the script to an older woman. Nicely done. Your narrative skills are excellent. One correction: Have Alex go to Ithaca to play baseball. Syracuse does not have a team.
Wonderful story. Definitely had me turned on. Would love more on these two.
Beautifully told love story, full of passion, tenderness, and drama, characterize the plot throughout.