by Boxlicker101
The amazing details of a woman having her pussy eaten out are second to none!! This is better than your Halloween contest entry, infinitely more erotic. Bravo!
Your sense of detail is exquisite. Enjoyable, erotic reading. Thank you
Thank you for a great story. I also love fucking a nice tight ass. Keep up the good writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Alot of writers find it difficult to keep up a good anal scene. Apparently you are different. Well done to you.
I love a good ass fucking, and reading your story is is almost as good as the real thing!
As a woman who enjoys a good ass fucking--all I can say is fucktastic!!
This is one of the most excellent erotic stories I have ever read. The lovemaking is dense with detail and languid and sensually prolonged, just like good sex. I can tell that you love and respect women, because that shows in your writing, your descriptive terms, the dialog, not just the actions of the characters. Erotic writing is usually exploitive, bone-headed porn. Rarely does it mingle true sensuality with good storytelling technique. You should be proud of this one!