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Click here"I opened your mouth so you could breathe, not waste our time with your pointless voice," she said callously.
"Yes, Mistress!" I quickly responded with vehemence, concerned that she would punish me later for thinking I was allowed to speak.
I instead focused my attention on this man physically. I tried to tighten and loosen the muscles in my ass to massage his engorged cock to the best of my ability. I also did my best to thrust myself back into him while timing myself to his thrusts as well. Everything I did only seemed to further my own pleasure and make it that much harder for me to control my orgasm while he seemed to keep his same pace.
After at least ten minutes, he suddenly picked up the pace drastically. He started hammering into me and I couldn't help but squeal in delight as the sudden rough treatment filled my entire body with pleasure that nearly took my orgasm right then and there. I had to fight it back with everything I had just to keep myself from letting it happen even though it was the only thing I wished for in the entire world at the moment.
I heard my Mistress chuckling again, she must be looking at me and realizing my struggle and enjoying every second of it. She loved to watch me struggle and squirm, she was just that kind of sadist. She would do just about anything if it hurt me, humiliated me, or degraded me. I never saw her any happier than when she was licking the tears from my face.
The "friend" behind me gripped my hips harder and picked the pace further. He was nearly matching the rough man from earlier now and I couldn't help but to nearly scream out in pleasure every time he rammed into me. He was turning my insides to mush and my brain to soup. I even caught myself drooling as I moaned and squirmed on his cock.
At one point I nearly lost control and orgasmed. I could feel every muscle in my body spasming as my orgasm was trying to break free of the hold I had on it. I think my only saving grace was my Mistress's voice when she said in a dangerous tone, "Don't you fucking dare, little whore." Without the shock and fear her demand caused, I might have completely lost myself to my orgasm.
He continued on and on for what seemed like an eternity as he drilled his cock in and out of me with no breaks, no reprieve, no signs of slowing down. I was starting to wonder if I would ever get to cum as his delicious cock continued to rearrange my bowels without any relief when he suddenly slammed into me with an almighty blow that actually caused me to scream out more from the pain than the pleasure.
It took me a second to even recognize that he was filling me with his cum but the moment it did register I screamed out as loud as I could with nothing holding my orgasm back anymore. I screamed until I ran out of breath and tried to scream more. My entire body twitched and spasmed and the strength in every limb faded away. My orgasm shook me to the very core of my being and back again. I didn't even register as he thrust into me a few more times to pump me full of his every drop of cum.
When my orgasm finally subsided I was panting like a bitch in heat and unable to catch my breath back up with the oxygen I had spent. I was only staying on all fours because of the rope at this point. I could feel the rope digging into me as it forced me to stay in position but it barely registered, I was completely spent from that last orgasm.
"Good girl," my Mistress said to me as she loosed my ropes, allowing me to collapse completely on the table.
"Thank you, Mistress," I barely managed to say the words in anything more than a mumble.
"Anyone who hasn't had a turn, feel free. Three holes are still open for business whether she is conscious or not," she said in a cruel tone.
I heard a few people stand up and come my direction but with my exhaustion, I barely managed to stay conscious for that. Laying there with the blindfold on the fatigue got to me before they did. I hope they enjoyed my body but I wouldn't know because they were gone by the time I woke up.
When I woke, I was in the cage at the foot of my Mistress's bed. Realizing where I was and that everything was over already, Iay back down and dreamed of what else she may have in store for me.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoOne of the best BDSM store's I've ever read!! Hope there is more to come!
MissDefilealmost 5 years agoAuthorThe fact that you have been in the lifestyle for 10 years and think this is rape concerns me. First off, you should realize that there are people that have dynamics where the submissive has already declared their fantasies and limits. The person that this story is based on is an actual person. So let's talk about the actual situation part of it. Allow me to tear your argument apart.
First off, there is something called a "safe signal" which is equivalent to a safe word and can be used when a submissive is restrained. It is very important to establish this safety net for anyone that would be gagged and restrained. Obviously, anyone with a gag is not capable of "call out" a safeword. This is where the safe signal comes in. I personally have a system that I train my slaves to use and I ensure they fully understand it before they are ever gagged in any way.
Secondly, the tear scene has nothing to do with sub drop. Some submissives like cry and that is the entire reason that dacryphilia (tear fetish) exists. Some people enjoy crying like that. Just because someone is crying does not mean they are in an unhealthy situation. Some people love crying just as much or more than they love to smile.
The brainwashing was a mixture of inexperience at writing erotica and wanting to show the slave was enjoying herself in the situation and that she wanted it. This is actually my first time attempting to write erotica.
As for the people coming in without her consent as she passed out, there are plenty of submissives that have consensual non-consent fantasies as well as somnophilia. The person that Sunny is based after is an actual person and one of her biggest fantasies was being used and abused repeatedly by men and women. Just because the story didn't lead with a 15 paragraph description of how the Mistress and the slave discussed limitations and expectations prior to this situation doesn't mean it is rape.
Gang rape fetishes are quite common. You're literally kink-shaming someone for fulfilling their slave's fantasies at this point. Ten years or not, you still are very much unaware of what is and is not ok if this story struck you as something so awful. Nothing that happened in this story was rape as anyone with actual experience in BDSM would have read
To top it off, you are saying it is blatant rape but it is clear that the relationship was clearly discussed and considered on both ends in the following quote from part one,
"Anyways, after talking to her for a few weeks I decided to try being her slave.."This particular paragraph also goes forward to say that this relationship formed years prior to this event. Do you really think that, in that amount of time, they will not have discussed what is and is not ok?
As for sexual passion between the Mistress and slave, many people want to be treated as an object. The character in question, Sunny, enjoyed being seen as property, an object to be used and abused for the entertainment of their Mistress. That was another of her fantasies.
I will completely give you everything you said in the last section and I feel the same way about all of what you said. I have a long way to go when it comes to learning how to write erotica if it is something that I intend to keep up with. I'm not a professional writer, nor am I trained in literature in any way. This is a first attempt, nothing more.
My summary of your comment is that you are taking a situation and immediately being skeptical of it with the assumption that the entire situation was non-consensual just because I didn't write out a part where they discussed it. Having written this story for my slave specifically, I didn't feel the need to write a long section about them establishing the relationship because she and I already knew that these were her kinks, including consensual non-consent scenes which always have to be established prior to the situation happening. I wrote this to give to the slave that sunny was based on because she asked me to, I posted it here on a whim so I didn't bother writing in the extra bits. She wanted total degradation, gang rape, objectification, throat fucking, and several others of her fetishes. Just because you do not like something, it is not propert BDSM etiquette to shame someone else's kinks and call them abusive just because you see them as extreme. At no point was she in danger and at no point was her consent violated. The fact that you don't understand this concerns me.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI read this and was completely shocked at the horrific scene.
As someone that been in the Lifestyle and BDSM for 10 years, I had so many moments in this sad excuse for an exotica rub me so wrong. For anyone that reads this people do not ever think that this is any form of BDSM. I think for one of the major reasons that bother me that looking at the writer's bio on her profile that most of her works are based off real life or as close to realism as it can get terrifies me for any submissive that is under her collar.
So why do I say this?
Well let's start with the fact I actually read Part 1 too and even then I had the strong urge to comment on it because how overwhelming not okay it was. Aside from the issues that the "Mistress" gave her sub absolutely no way to call out a safeword, explain the situation of what was going to happen in that part or this one, gave up a image of forced and non-consenual. The slave was forced to be expected to do everything and receive pleasure form it, because she is a slave coming off more of a fantasy fanficion of a Gorean lifestyle than two consenting adults.
Aside from this, I have no idea why the tear scene was inputted into the work as it clearly made the sub sound like she dropped and once drop your body does not magically recover just because a cock is pressed into you. There was also a very overhaul abusive tones and hostile if viscous display to the said "Mistress" through both works of part one and part two.
There is a strong difference in being a sadistic Mistress and being abusive one. With all the cringing through this read, I honesty felt bad for a fictional character. Like if the writer's aim was to make it the most uncomfortable, being used as nothing feeling then BAM you got it, but if was show a realistic sex scene between a Mistress and a willing slave, then no. Absolutely not in this case.
The submissive came off as extreme brainwashed and ego stroking the writer's ego, the Mistress. The hardcore unrealistic reached out to how far her, the sub, body to go and the mentalness her her mind. There was also no concept of if you tie someone up for that long they will not be able to due to muscles spams and natural openness to torn ligaments. Or the fact there was a break and expect the men's penises to stay arouse for that long. That's not unnatural unless you have pill.
And finally the last part.
It was bluntly rape. The men coming in like a pack of wolves to use her body without her consent at all as she passed out. Reminds me of the vanilla concept of tapping a drunk girl that had one too many and fell out of it on your bed. Even if mentally she was okay there was no vocal or psychical gesture at the end that gave away to the "Mistress" she wanted it. Not to mention with how emotionally and psychically impacting this group of 20 people one scene had on the sub there was also absolutely no reassurance of actually passion between the Mistress and slave that was sexually inighted and therefore no proper aftercare was provided.
If you are going to write in a sense of realism. I strongly recommend you find someone that has experience in doing a massive grouped scene rather than someone believing that actually have the ability to do this said scene based on realism.
Icing on the cake - The structure of the story.
I'll keep this part smalelr. Many of the same subject and structures was used over and over such as "Worthless Cunt" there are many different phases that can be replaced or exchange to keep the reader not nodding off but have the same word inpact as the degradation used. There was also the repeating sentences but reshaped into a less detailed version right beside each other. It got to the point at times I felt I read the same thing over and over to just get to the next part in the story.
As for the concept of emotions there was absolutely no emotion in anything just the story came off as a "Here are facts," instead of feelings. Which also touched a nerve due to BDSM is a very passionate and emotional thing where this lacked all if any. This included the lack of senses despite the sub was deprived there was hardly if not any uses of her ability to feel, smell and taste just concepts of being touched but nothing more.
My summary, is that the writer needed an extreme ego boast and used this need to be stroked vs realism and how a sub would actually respond. Which is fine if your goal at the end of the day was NOT realism or form "real life" experience. I hope that if this is based off real life experience that this subs learn the different between abuse and sadism, BDSM slave and slavery.
