by Leythe
Like the way you ended this. You took it from being a great story of Sci fi and Incest into forced. He didn't have to do that. He could have been a different person.
I agree the ending could have been better. But overall a good read lookin forward to the next one.
I like the ending cause it leaves a lot of potential and hints at more to come.
What happens if she develops an obsession with stimulating her penis? What happens if she feels the urge for penetrative sex and big brother is the only one available? She's super fast and may be much stronger than he.
There are not glands on the end of the penis, it is glans. It is "it", not "they". As in, "the glans is sensitive", not "the glans are sensitive".
Enjoyed it otherwise, looking forward to the next installment.
Yea, have Rae screw Ethan hard in the ass or even make her screw her friend. I think it would be awesome if Rae got a second dick somehow and then screwed her friend and her brother at the same time. :)
Really great work! I loved this story, and really really hope we'll see a second chapter.
Oh wow, this was so hot! I'm a straight guy, but even I want to suck on her cock :P