All Comments on 'Superhero and Cheerleader Pt. 01'

Due to the category, I suspected as much.

Very well done. Good pacing and descriptions.

Thanks. Please don’t keep us in suspense too long.

Short.

Hope there is a conclusion.

Look forward to seeing more

Wonderful introduction. Please keep it going.

Wow what a hot sexy start to this story. anxious for more soon please.

Be on the lookout for more chapters. I'm trying to mix the sexual content and character development as much as possible, as there is a full story I want to tell here beyond the sexuality. Expect more after the holidays as my time gets a bit more freed up.

Unfortunately there will not be a part 2 to this story as the site has rejected my submission due to "punctuation issues". I neither have the time nor desire to worry about punctuation like I'm in a high school english class. We're writing sex stories here, not trying to earn a Pulitzer prize.

check the front page, there is a list of volunteer editors who are happy to help those with little time. please check it out. your story is worth continuing

Grammarly is free and can help with punctuation as does MSWord's built in Grammar Checking. Also, there are literally hundreds of volunteer editors you could pick from.