All Comments on 'Sur la Table'

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jth215-2jth215-2about 4 years ago
So much eroticism!!!

The description and action are so sensual. I can only imagine what follows... Thanks for sharing!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
Not bad, needs help

Not a bad essay except it needs editing. Spelling errors and grammar edits are needed to keep it flowing and correct. Good luck.

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Well-educated gent who enjoys giving agonizing pleasure to ladies of all sizes, shapes, and colors. My stories tend to be a bit harder-edged than I am in practice, but there's a dark side of me that likes to come out and play if all are amenable.