All Comments on 'Surfer Girl'

Well done short story. Perfect blend of erotic and adorable.

Sure, he got what he wanted, had been wanting, and waiting for, for some time till this point. But he didn't ..., force anything, and actually gave her the final decision in the matter.

Ok, so we all predict the outcome, but he did give her the choice. And I'd like to believe he'd abide by her decision not to proceed if she so chose.

Like to see what's next for these two.