by PinkIris
Hi,
M/60/Louisiana, USA
I liked your story. It was well crafted, well written and read wonderfully. Please keep it up.
Thanks,
Jerry
Exceptional writing and understanding. Please keep writing. You have a gift.
I willl add my voice to your growing list of compliments. Your writing skills and your editor's polish have created a masterpiece. The intensity was a bit overwhelming. Your variety of vocabulary builds to an incredible finish. Amazing erotic passion followed by... I won't say. Other readers will need to enjoy your story for themselves. Fabulous story so very well done.
- Jake