All Comments on 'Surprise at the Office'

by PinkIris

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hello

Hi,

M/60/Louisiana, USA

I liked your story. It was well crafted, well written and read wonderfully. Please keep it up.

Thanks,

Jerry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it!

F/22/Canada

Great story! Keep it up!

SLOgentSLOgentabout 12 years ago
Wonderful

Exceptional writing and understanding. Please keep writing. You have a gift.

tellstory2jaketellstory2jakeabout 12 years ago
Another Compliment

I willl add my voice to your growing list of compliments. Your writing skills and your editor's polish have created a masterpiece. The intensity was a bit overwhelming. Your variety of vocabulary builds to an incredible finish. Amazing erotic passion followed by... I won't say. Other readers will need to enjoy your story for themselves. Fabulous story so very well done.

- Jake

CanadianMCanadianMalmost 12 years ago
Enjoyed it!

Well done, nice pace and the sex was hot. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A truly hot story.

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