All Comments on 'Surprise Camping Trip'

Great story so far tons of opertunites still possible can't wait to read more parts

This is pathetic and stupid, why would the son knowingly not stop that nonconsental crap on his mother? We sll.know this shit is fake be really...this is garbage

Good story. Couple of misprints

You should proofread

Most of the people commenting on your stories have worse spelling than you do.

I liked it. I haven't been that interested in a while.

1 star. author is a sick f**k.

What a croc of crap. You the writer are a very sick person because if I would have been there I would have thrown the drinks that they gave me way and waited patiently and would have laid those bastards out cold, cut their cocks and balls off off and left them to die in there own blood.