All Comments on 'Surprise Siblings Ch. 02'

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Panicbutton89 over 4 years ago

Not enough

You need to make your chapters longer. Make it an actual story, instead of just a couple of bits and pieces. The reader will get very bored of this style very quickly. I know that I don't want to read anymore if it's not going to have a whole story in one chapter.

cageysea9725 over 4 years ago

Please stop

Your best writing is horrible. Stop.

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