All Comments on 'Surprise Visit'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I like this story. You should be a little more descriptive though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 Stars. I liked it, a bit unusual, but handled nicely.

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