All Comments on 'Surprised By Daddy'

Fantastic story until you decided to toss that last little bit in there about their dog fucking her... Nope.

Loved this short story...wish there was more to it!! I do hope that you will continue on about what happens next!

Please keep the story alive and continue on from where you stopped. I wish someone would do this to me!

The story itself isn't bad, but you could use an editor. For example, you don't need "had, had", one had will do. But, overall not too bad. Keep writing.

write more, soon, would love to read how much more she can take, loved it

This seems a lot like 50 shades of grey

If this has any resemblance to Fifty Shades it's mere coincidence. I have never read the books, nor do I intend to. Thank you for reading this though. :)

... OF INCEST. SHOULD BE UNDER BDSM.

well the girl is normal but the father is sick,sick,sick and the writer is even worst,it s not incest it s a RAPE,RAPE.A big fucking zero....

people that read that shit and like it are not normal

I loved it. That's exactly how I like to get fucked. My boyfriend fucks me like this until I'm raw and then fucks me more. This story was really hot and incredible.

wish my daddy would do this

Mmm lucky if i had a daddy id want him to fuck me like this.

I’m so confused why people come on here and shit on some of these stories . A lot of kinks come from sexual trauma . For example I have a rape kink bc I’ve been raped so many times etc . So idk if u don’t wanna read it don’t read it. I generally don’t agree with age regression tho but don’t judge