All Comments on 'Surprised by Joyce'

Excellent!!

Not to rain on your parade, but women in their late sixties, seventies, don't get sloppy wet naturally. It takes a bit of time to 'warm' us up and then we'll go it at like a mink, but it doesn't happen without help. Point number two, we don't kneel and suck cock at 69 or 70, our knees can't take it. Had you been a bit more cognizant of how we old birds bodies actually work the story would have been lovely.

Great!!

Really liked the story but I was confused by the above comment. I thought the author covered both points.

K

5 Stars. Very hot - please continue.

I loved your story! What a wonderful life your two characters have even knowing it will a short relationship.

This story shows there's hope for us old biddies yet! I'm not quite at Joyce's age yet, but I do enjoy being fucked, taken up the arse and as for sucking cock, I love tasting myself on a nice thick one. I really enjoyed this, and unlike anonymous who did rain on your parade I thought with her negative comments, I'm happy to award this 5 stars.

*****One Hot weird azz story, but a very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you. I rarely have the patience to read longer stories, but this one hooked me sufficiently to read not just it, but a couple more of yours besides and left me looking forward to reading the rest; how could it not warrant five stars.

Very good story, it grew on me as i read. I've been there and done that. As for your follower who doubted the kneeling etc, my i say she probably wasn't properly motivated. Keep up the good work!

Love this delightful sexy and erotic story, Thank You for sharing, I hope there is more. I find senior women to be such a turn on, they really are beautiful and sexy. This wonderful story brings back some lovely memories of a past relationship, Thanks so much!

Love the stockings!

The secret of this type of fiction is making it believable. You did a great job with character development and describing a real situation. It was also nice to read about senior citizens who have flaws and DONT have 38DD fake tits. June was real to me. At 70 soon to be 71 I’d have much more fun with someone 55+ who isn’t perfect (and neither am I) than anyone under 45 with fake tits, ass etc. Good read.

Good story!

4

Lovely tale

Wonderful, amazing story. Thanks. I'll look forward to reading others you wrote.

Lovely dream for some, well written with good descriptions of characters and sex.

loved the story. would have been a nice series

Excellent story, well written and very erotic. Must agree with willymakeit, very refreshing to read a story about a woman with a real body. Please keep it up.

Good premise.

But sex is much too abrupt. Too automatic. Lacks needed details. Lacks preliminaries/foreplay.

Three stars.

I've now read all your stories and think they are great. your last one was August 2022 i hope you next offering will be sooner rather than later

The two seemed to enjoy the sex. I have never had anal sex with anyone, but this story makes it sound possible.

Lovely story, enjoyed it a lot. AAAAAA++++++

Older mature women are full of surprises and be it dress or toys they love to try different sexual pleasuring.

Very, very good story!!!!!!!!!!!