All Comments on 'Surprised Sister-In-Law'

I sure wish I could have my wife's sister just once. I've had a crush on her for years. She reminds me of Jennifer Aniston in a lot of ways.

ya didn't finish the story

I'll go along with an earlier commentor - I liked it a lot and I wished it was longer. Usually I'm ready for a story to end but in this case I wanted more, Maybe that was your intention - if so it worked.

Marie

Thanks for all your feedback. First time virgin for me. Be easy please. Thanks again.

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I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.

But, in 5 words, IT WAS TOO DAMN SHORT!

Hope this is the start of a great series!

It was definately a quickie, and that's not a bad thing. You didn't describe your characters, and some readers might find that a negative. On the contrary, many people have had similar fantasies and NOT describing them makes it easier to insert their own fantasy person.

Please continue.