All Comments on 'Surprising Wife Ch. 01'

by Spiritogre

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

True love is true love I wish we had more women like her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sorry your characters don't make sense

In chapter 02 she cheats on him and feels no guilt at all, but her she's broken up with her old boyfriend because he cheated on her.

The does make any sense at all. Does she not have basic human emotions to help her understand that her being hurt by being cheated on means George would be too?

Sorry, but this story isn't making sense and it seems totally contrived.

Your english us fine, it's the story and characters that aren't good.

BeneTleilaxBeneTleilaxalmost 2 years ago

I thought this was cute.

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