All Comments on 'Surrender'

A short, to the point fantasy. I liked it.

I want this guy.

As an online roleplayer, I've only ever had hints of naughtiness like this from my boyfriend, and after reading this... I want so much more.

This is really well written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

You must have originally written this in second person and rewrote it in first (a much better choice). In your editing, however, you forgot a "you". The paragraph begins with "He grinned wickedly" and is the last sentence in the paragraph. Otherwise, good story and to the point.

Most seductive non con!!;))very sexy way to cancel an impending break up!!;))His raping tried to provide as many orgasms to the virgin girlfriend before taking her...as possible!!;))He cooked a delicious platter for her for the first time....ok ish!!..Not bad huh?!;))