All Comments on 'Surrender in Shadow Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow!

Ho-lay shit! Should've worn a panty liner. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Well done

Awaiting Ch. 2! This is excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fine first story

This is excellent. A snappy dialog and vivid descriptions. I look forward to future contributions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Brilliant

Great story , excellent writing and tension. Please write

Chapter 2 (ps. This is keeping me in relation to a long denied lover sane- hoping one day he will be mine and take me like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
DJ you disgust me

Fuck u

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