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by westjayne495

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10towers10towersabout 4 years ago
Wonderfully written

I read the two chapters out of order, so I'll go back to act 2 and enjoy it again. It is a pleasure to read a great story written by a talented woman, and from her perspective. Too many submissions written by a man are just "wham bam" without the emotional part of the encounter. Thanks for sharing a few details in your bio.

maribel_fmaribel_fabout 4 years ago
That hit the spot!

Dear Jayne, you are as expert in portraying conflicted emotions as you are in narrating magnificent sex!!!

Love

Marixxxxx

Wiz1002Wiz1002about 4 years ago
Tremendous narrative

Loved reading this story (& others of yours) and found it very entertaining and highly arousing.

HardBenHardBenalmost 4 years ago
WOW

Another thoroughly emotional story whilst still retaining wonderful eroticism.

Great writing.

Great story

XXX

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Thoroughly enjoying my return to Lit, both writing stories and chatting. Love to hear from anyone who reads my stories and has any comments to make both positive and negative but please not anonymously! I am getting used to being separated and despite the lockdowns enjoying m...