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by bleeep

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BlueEyd2BlueEyd2about 3 years ago

I really liked it, but you really rushed the ending with the last two sentences. Left it very flat at the end.

clearcreekclearcreekabout 2 years ago

it was too short, but worth reading

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Agree with the other reviewers - short but very well written and highly erotic. Great job bleeep

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

1) a 4-year age difference is no big deal unless one is underage. I've had family with age differences over 20 years apart married for decades.

2) Hated the ending. They should've stayed together. One-night stands or just getting together for "fun" stories are BORING!

wwaldripwwaldrip4 months ago

Great story enjoyed reading it

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Been suffering a bit of writer's block lately. I think I've overcome that, at least for the moment as I just submitted my third work in a little over a week. "Molly" was a story I'd been working on for over two years and the newest one "Irresistible Force" nearly as long. Sti...