by red99m2
If you indicate this is chapter 1 and the story will be continued then do so in a timely manner. Far too many authors its weeks/months even a year or more until the next chapter which is bad.
Don't make us wait for the next chapter. Would like to see the story developed.
Add me to the list of people who would like to see this developed further! Now that he knows she is not his biological daughter, how will this affect their relationship, both in and out of bed?
Timely,
It's unfolding in my head, it will be some time (weeks not years) before it is available as electrons for your reading pleasure :+)
NOT!!!!!
I can't believe people liked this tripe. Some of the most unrealistic, clunky dialogue it has ever been my misfortune to read.
I would like these five minutes of my life back, please.
Anon,
Your comment might be meaningful if you had the courage to post from your account.
Damn, no second chapter! When will I learn to check these things first!! Doh.