All Comments on 'Susan and Daddy Ch. 01'

by red99m2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
timely manner

If you indicate this is chapter 1 and the story will be continued then do so in a timely manner. Far too many authors its weeks/months even a year or more until the next chapter which is bad.

jandrplayjandrplayover 10 years ago
Just Keep it Coming

Don't make us wait for the next chapter. Would like to see the story developed.

WriteOfWayWriteOfWayover 10 years ago
Looking forward to the next installment(s)

Add me to the list of people who would like to see this developed further! Now that he knows she is not his biological daughter, how will this affect their relationship, both in and out of bed?

red99m2red99m2over 10 years agoAuthor
Chap 2

Timely,

It's unfolding in my head, it will be some time (weeks not years) before it is available as electrons for your reading pleasure :+)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Dialogue

NOT!!!!!

I can't believe people liked this tripe. Some of the most unrealistic, clunky dialogue it has ever been my misfortune to read.

I would like these five minutes of my life back, please.

red99m2red99m2over 10 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous

Anon,

Your comment might be meaningful if you had the courage to post from your account.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Damn, no second chapter! When will I learn to check these things first!! Doh.

hrobbiehrobbieover 3 years ago

Didn't like the Dick Hammett cop-out.

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Just getting Susan and her daddy going again, I have been lax for way too long.

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