All Comments on 'Susan Awakens Ch. 03'

I like where this was going but I'm feeling the impatient want for this to get there already. I hope we reach our climax soon enough! Take care, good writing so far. - Jim

Loved this story. Please write more of this story soon. It is too good to be left as is.

Where is chapter 4. This is a great story, please continue it soon.

Great story, but where is the next chapter. Don't leave this story unfinished.

and very irritating with him calling her ma'am all the time. Needed a lot more action with the son and neighbor sucking and fucking each other and then the Susan getting introduced in to having sex with her son and the neighbor.

Good build-up and movement between characters. Eagerly awaiting the next instalment.

It's a good thing you stopped writing seven years ago as I don't think I could take another too short chapter that just left you hanging. This chapter actually should have been in the Mature section as there was no incest in it. He thought about his mother but he fooled around with the older neighbor.