All Comments on 'Susan Unplugged'

Was to fast and most of us I would like to think like a more laid back slow story as we take it all in and leaves us wanting for more from the Author.

Gave you a "5" only to make you think more before you go wham == bam on your next story or you will get a "1" the next time.!!

Jacko

Sorry, bad story telling. You focused on all the wrong things for a story this short - it was like a play by play. There was no emotion in it. No trepidation or fear of the taboo in the minutes leading up to the sex. Also some blatant typos detracted from the flow. Get inside your characters' heads a little.

How the hell did i get to the story about watersports? I feel so dirty and nasty, and not in a good way. "Tight, dirty pussy" I am soooooo disgusted

OMG that was so hot. I cummed everywhere!

I really enjoyed it--i suppose i love this subject, so please keep writing these kinds of stories!

love reading about it

I loved the buildup, her predicament, the caring way he helped her, and the erotic turn when he started rubbing her and she responded. The pacing was perfect for me (not too short at all).

I hated that he calls her "baby" constantly, that he talks about himself in the third person ("Daddy would love to put his hard cock inside your tight dirty pussy"), and the way both of them suddenly got super nasty at the end – because it was out of the characters you had established for them.

Love it. Come sit on daddies face and let's not wast our fluids.