All Comments on 'Susan's Request Ch. 03'

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gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
GEE

what a slut, another cheating wife story, when will hubby see the tats abd kick her out and the school find out she is having sex with a student and fire her

Jetta_WalesJetta_Walesabout 19 years ago
Very enjoyable.

I have enjoyed this on going story very much though would love to see a more intimate relationship develope between Susan and Kaz it seemed at the end that he was getting a little protective of her in his pulling her away from his finger in her ass. Let him care for her more and maybe introduce a little BDSM to intensify thier one on one relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
J.D. LOVES IT

I READ THIS STORY AND ENJOY IT ALOT I REALLY ENJOY STORIES LIKE THESE. ALSO YOUR WRITING SKILLS ARE VERY GOOD

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow!

Three top stori.es in a row

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Damn hot

this is a great stoy, i know my body will not quite till i finish the whole thing!! KEEP WRITING!!

MrBondsMrBondsover 7 years ago
Awesome story!

great writing...very descriptive...very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved it. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry I disagree with the comments, I think this was a poor chapter in an otherwise good story.

I know its fantasy but opportunities missed, no build up to her having a tatioo no loud protest about it being a Hammer and Sickle Jim must be a multi-tasking clever sod drawing a picture while getting undressed and then shoving his knob in while operating in her skin? What was the picture on Her arse? Why did Kaz collapse and how was Her Life further changed forever? So much left unsaid.

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