All Comments on 'Susan's Story'

I would have liked to seen him stay with her and continue to fuck her until at least they knew she had gotten pregnant, at which time they could then part, or marry, or whatever they chose to do.

I loved Susan's Story. I do enjoy an erotic deflowering story from the ladies point of view. Now, if Susan would bring her blond friend to be devirginated by Matt, you'd have me hooked on your stories.

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The Shag carpeted van is a '70's thing, CD's are '90's. The crossing of periods was a distraction to the story. The sex was hot, and bareback/threat of pregnancy adds an element of danger. I don't know how probable the story line is, but after talking to a few females I've learned that young girls are capable of anything. They are much wilder than I would have ever believed. After reading this I almost want to buy a van- maybe a Scion xB?

This man is the kind of individual who should be put away and the key lost. Thus should only be a piece of fiction, but is true of too many attacks on young girls, and she is made to feel guilty and that it was her fault.

I really enjoyed this story, it reminded me very much of my first time and got me wet all over again. If you did not understand the story let me try to help you. As a young girl I wanted an older man to take me and teach me about sex. It was wonderful and painful to learn at the same time, just as in the story. Keep writing, and yes the van was a nice touch.

I really liked this. Lovely first-person writing style, too!

A very well written, and interesting story.

What you say before the story about it being true concerns me. If this happened to you, you should seek help if it is bothering you.

Just my two cents.