All Comments on 'Susan's Submission'

did....the story loop or am I crazy??

Horrible writing!

Good story. Seems to repeat the intro...?

Seemed like a good start but what happened?,,,,,Seemed like a good start but what happened?

I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you are able to fix the entry loop, as it looks like the story is meant to end when Susan leaves the hotel.

Do you have any plans for a series?

5 stars.

Needs an editor.

For readers: the story is l meant to end when Susan leaves the hotel.

For the author: I enjoyed your first story. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

The repetition is a copy&paste error during submission

I‘ve submitted the fix already but that needs 2 days to be applied. .

Why is it in these stories so often the blackmail victims do things way worse than what they are being blackmailed with??