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Click hereIn discovery, I was finding that I am not the dominant that I've wanted to be, I am at heart a submissive and this is how I always will be... And the other discovery or 'learning' I had found is that when all along I believed it was Susan who was the one who was truly letting go and was giving in to find herself and discover this new road to her own happiness...
But it wasn't... It wasn't just Susan...
It wasn't just Susan's Surrender that set her free... It was also my own...
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Nice story but I feel that it could end a little better, meaning after that weekend with the older sister, and to see if Susan would turn tables on Heather....
Had a hard time leaving this story to work. Feel that after chapter 5 you could have written a chapter having Susan, naked on her knees, sucking Heathers toes and kissing her feet in total submission. Clearly showing her total submission to Heather plus having Heather stand up to Bev. Plus Heather using her strap-on to use Susan’s ass. Plus, having Susan’s daughter available for both Susan and Heather to play with.
More chapters please.
I loved the story, and it is a shame that it is now finished. I was hoping that Susan was going to turn the tables on Heather and take control as I felt she was really the stronger character of the two, but just accepting the role as submissive as she got her life back together, and that was the only role she really knew. But I felt that if she was allowed to express herself she would probably be able to become the Dom in the partnership. But hey maybe you could write a sequel to this whereby the roles are switched. Any way thanks for the story.
Rgds Al