All Comments on 'Susie's No-Panties Christmas Surprise'

Good story but question. Is the guy guilty of rape on any level? Also good imagery but when she describes her first time she said he was trying to put a condom on and undo her bra while she had his dick in her mouth. See the problem? How can the guy even attempt to put a condom on while getting a blowjob? I mean how does that even work? Other than that very neat an well described. Keep it up.

Most delightful. I wished you had recent submissions, I hate seeing a good writer to stop writing their wonderful stories. Please come back.

Georgia Peach

Surprised at ending & surprised because so many of your other stories not very good

Very well done! I was completely surprised at the start of page 2.

Absolutely loved this!

Loved the story! It had a great plot, it was descriptive and it was just overall a hot read.

That was an great story. The ending was so clever!

Hot story - nice descriptions, altogether fabulously written!

I had a feeling this was going to happen, but it was still a surprise when it actually did happen. excellent. Wonder what old man Brewster's New Year's resolution will be??

Great story. Loved the twist at the end. You could write another few chapters on this story very easily. Keep up the great work.

Sexy with a twist that made it even sexier! Great writing! Bravo!

Oh my god! With his FATHER!?! Ew! Jeez, no wonder he was protesting so much at first. I remember thinking midway how weird it was for a teenage boy to be AGAINST the concept of having hot, taboo sex with his girlfriend. But jeez, the DAD? And he couldn't say so? What a jerk. Heh.

Awesome story, though. I love the way you wrote it, first person stream-of-thought kinda thing. Very sexy.

But you know, I can think of a few "Santa's" that I'd like to accidently fuck...

That was really fun reading and hot too. Nice ending and totally unexpected. I was waiting for them to get caught. LOL

Good luck.

that was really great

good

What a great twist! I was tense all through the parade, afraid they would be caught. And then the big realization! Fabulous story. Great story!

A perfect combination of kinkiness and real hot sex! Reading this makes me so hot that i have to fish out my viberator.

The best I've read so far, hot, christmassy and well written!

I am so pleased that people have been enjoying this story ... it was a lot of fun to write. All the comments and feedback are greatly appreciated.

and that one was totally hot!! Great twist there, very unexpected and wonderfully written.

Poor Santa! This is great. I wish I lived in Silver Falls!

I have just one comment.

Silver Falls must be quite a kinky town if the Santa Claus Parade features an Elf riding barebottom on an Elk!

ooo! That helps heat up the holidays *^_^* Love the twist ending. Love it!

Mooncat

>^,,^<

Light, but hot -- with an unexpected twist. Good luck! ~Imp

Very well written and descriptive, I felt as if I were there on the sleigh with our heroine.

The twist at the end was exquisite!

"Merry Christmas to all,and to all a good night!"

I must confess I did not see the twist coming until it happened. Lovely, full of fun. I bet the author is, too.

With all the stories that have serious endings out there (mine included!) it's nice to have some lighthearted, well-written fare. Good luck!

Just as said, very nice.

Great first-person storytelling..really felt like I was riding along with Susie..wonderful descriptions..nice twist ending!!

Boy did that not turn out like I thought it would. That was GOOD! Keep 'em coming!