All Comments on 'Suspicion Ch. 13'

Not how I expected it to end. Maybe he ought to wait awhile before he tells his wife the part he played in her downfall.

Boyd

Im not sure I could have held it together like this guy. You did make him the hero in the end, that said. Good story.

NOT the "deep" "roots" the husband rationalized away for his own sake, his own pseudo psychological needs, as quoted down here. <p>

An adult, a mother, a supposedly loving mother, who could demand that her husband of 16 years simply accept her living separately, from him and their children, so she could fuck another man, her long lost high school beau --- either to see if the "sparks" were there again OR simply because she just "love you both, so I can't choose, so just allow me to take turns living with each other you" --- is NOT fit as person with whom an intelligent person [husband] could really reason that he and SHE had had a deep, loving relationship BEFORE her beau arrived on the scene again, unexpectedly, disrupting them.... <p>

To LIE and to use diseases and other destructive manufactured evidence --- AS THE MOST IMPORTANT MEANS --- to coerce the wife and her lover to hate each other [when in reality they didn't, despite misgivings], AND to make them both lose their livelihoods, so she would return home [as obviously she can't pay the apartment rent any more], ALSO SIMPLY show why there was never any deep rooted and true loving "best friend" relationship and trust,,, IN THE FIRST PLACE,,, <p>

[[[Please, note: here I am NOT trying to *understand* the characters: I am doing a pseudo analysis of the thinking process of the AUTHOR himself, rightly or wrongly...]]]

That the wife, after having fucked her old boyfriend for months, was now having serious second thoughts --- because she rather be on vacation and have fun with her husband and kids --- simply shows further evidence and proof that SHE makes pro-active decisions based on her deep and individual wants and needs..... <p>

..... The family's suffering only plays a part in her thinking process when she thinks she's "gone too far" [[[e.g. demanding that her husband and children allow her to rent an apartment away, so she could have "quality time" with her lover, an act that to her, EVEN TO HER, might have pushed them too far]]] ..... to me, that is not a person I would say, "Yes, she's no longer my best friend, but I can live with her, since she, on her own, decided to come back to us [thank god, before it's really too late! lol], so I guess that's better than the alternative... better than she not returning..." <p>

For all that, even if the story still has 2 more chapters to go, I just can't give it more than "50" as a rating. The final two short chapters are simply a pre-ordained closure already predicated on the following paragraphs...So the story really has ended here, for all intends and purposes. To jerk it around, ON THE OTHER HAND --- SAY, for Sarah Palin effect or for any other clever or unpredictability purposes--- would simply make the whole premise even more nonsense than it already is... <p>

After having read all the different/alternative continuation/endings, I think the original author WhiteOne_Redone's IS STILL the most realistic one: --- e.g., <p>

"Love may be a many splendored thing, but love can also be a very destructive force when Cupid decides to play his practical jokes. So it was for Kathy and me.

- Fini -" <p>

THAT, to me --- and especially if you add the post-script notes to the whole story --- ended so much more real, so TRAGICALLY much more real, in such a bittersweet way, that you remember it long after you read it, EVEN IF YOU KNOW "it's only a story..." <p>

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"You know, reflecting on truth and lies, throughout this entire sad time, I realized that you lied to me in two ways: you initially tried to misdirect me, by suggesting that the bite marks on your breasts were bruises; and you certainly lied to me by omission — by NOT telling me things that I should have known. On the other hand, when I asked a direct question, you didn't lie to me, you confessed. For that I am grateful. I'm not saying the 'lies' of misdirection and omission haven't hurt me, but they don't hurt as much as if you had out and out lied to my face when I asked you a question," I concluded. <p>

At that point, I moved over next to Kathy on the couch, and hugged her, and she returned the embraced with a quiet desperation. We sat like that for a couple of minutes, not saying anything, just holding each other like survivors of some terrible disaster, although in our case, it was not natural. <p>

A lot of my anger had dissipated, some of it as a natural consequence of having Kathy back living with us over the past several months, some due to the fact that I had taken action to deal with both Karl and Kathy. Before Karl had shown up at her office, we'd had a good marriage, and you don't have a long-term good marriage if you don't, at some fundamental level, get along and like each other. I still liked and loved Kathy. She wasn't my best friend to quite the same degree that she had been, and our love had taken a hit, but the roots were deep and were damaged, not destroyed.

SUSPEND BELIEF TO ACCEPT PREMISE, BUT HOW FAR? WHAT EXACTLY WAS THE POINT OF TORTURING KATHY AT THE END OF THE AFFAIR WITH TERMINATION, DISGRACE AND STD's FOR A FEW DAYS IF YOU'RE JUST GOING TO TAKE HER BACK AS SOON AS SHE SNAPS HER FINGERS? I MEAN, SHE CAME BACK OF HER OWN ACCORD AFTER 5 MONTHS ANYWAY. FOR 5 MONTHS OR 50 MONTHS AUTHOR YOU HAD PAUL SUCK KATHY AND KARLS ASS. AND EVERYONE KNEW SHE'D COME BACK EVENTUALLY AND IF SHE DIDN'T YOU HAD "NONDOGMATIC" PAUL WILLING TO PUT UP WITH THIS SHIT FOR AS LONG AS IT TOOK, SO WHAT WAS THE POINT OF THE TORTURE, AND WHY SO EXTREME IF AS SOON AS SHE SAYS JUMP, PAUL SAYS HOW HIGH? GEE PAUL GOT KATHY TO CRY AND BE WORRIED FOR A FEW HOURS FOR FUCKING KARL, WHAT, 20 TO 100 TIMES OVER THE LAST 5 MONTHS AND THEN HOW MANY 100'S OF TIMES BEFORE HE CAUGHT HER IN THE FIRST PLACE. "THE PLAN = WASTE OF LIFE." But, it was so sweet to reconcile them back together cause Kathy is such a prize worth winning. And I'm sure all the readers of this novel would put up with 5+ months of SHARING their SO with someone else too, until that fickle, skanky person finally decided they liked you and the kids more and decided to come back home to grace you with their disease ridden ass permanently. I think I have a job for paul to tide him over. He can come over to the public toilets in my area and lick the scum from inside the porcelain. Compared to the humiliation and just plain insane behavior he's used to giving and getting for the last 5 months just to touch that whorible pig of a wife of his, this actually might be a step up.

I read it all but basically I would say that Paul, Karl and Kathy deserve each other..... I would just be pleased to not have to be in contact with them. What Paul did here should lead to another rupture if it ever comes out. Therefore he will have to be the "cheater" for the rest of his life with all the superiority feeling associated with it!

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Unless this breakup is to occur in the remaining chapters it would seem like a fine place to end the story.

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Thanks for all the hard work and plotting

Story still coming along nicely. Did not care for the fake pictures and the STD revenge. A bit over the top for me. ***** Comments from the readers are also very interesting and reveal a lot about them. It must be nice to be perfect in all things and never need a second chance or a bit of mercy. ***** Husband loves wife, and after sixteen years of marriage, knows her pretty good. He decides he will fight for her after finding out about the affair. That's a man I can respect. He sees the long term goal and puts up with the pain and humiliation of the ongoing affair because he takes the long view and believes the affair is a one time thing - never to be repeated. ***** Author, you must take the comments as a trophy of your writing skill. You have pushed an emotional button in your readers and generated some real emotion. My goodness, people are actually taking the time to write and isn't that great!

wife but that seduced her as his sexual toy, I have no problem with that. But you allowed the man to continue to live with a woman of no morals or character, nor from a professional view does she appear to have any ethics. She actually favored her lover over her husband and her family and her only pain was a supposed bout of "clap" caused by a trap from her husband, not over the top at all, she could have actually brought it home to him any time. And getting fired from her job. For living for a long period with a disrespecting, cheating, adulterous wife with no morals he simply lets her move back in. He should have taken her in the house after the showdown in the yard, handed her her divorce papers and asked her to leave the house. Personally as a husband I could not have lived with her at all even before the yard scene. After all who would really trust themselves and their childrens welfare to a woman with such mental problems? Her definition of love is what she wants at the minute, has nothing to do with the relationship with her husband, had she really loved him, this whole story would have never happened.

Definitely a different cheating wife story. Please keep submitting. I would really rate this story about an 85-90.

Talk about a surprise ending-No way I saw this coming -Great story -BRAVO WRITER -

that WAS a suprise end to this chapter.This story has so many twists and turns and half truths(and some damn right lies) that the character(or the writer) must be a politician or at least a lawyer.

taken care of Karl for getting him fucking up his marriage making his wife a cheat and a slut.( Maybe she was all along but just needed a push). I think he let her off to easy. Forget the clap and all that but remember how she was when she told him about Karl. " We are seperating...I have a lover..." come on man...she said a lot of nasty things and until he stomps Karls ass he is a wimp.

that he'd already heard she had to resign because of Kyle? That would definitely bring some tension to the remaining chapters.</p> While I like the writing, the only character I liked was her sister.

Years later when they became empty nesters and Paul felt empty inside. He disgusted his feelings or lack of them with Kathy. Over the last few years their love life had diminished in passion and quantity. They began going to Marriage Conciliating. After months of talking they were able to determine Kathy affair had emasculated and eaten away at Paul's love for Kathy. Now with the children gone Paul realized he just didn't want to be with Kathy anymore and asked for a separation which lead to eventually divorce. They parted as friends. When Paul became serous with someone else, Kathy was sad for herself, but happy for Paul.

sad for you to feel total control is the only way to end the story. The character has a secret. Jill knows his secret. When does the charater off Jill? Your story leads to Jill telling Kathy's boss what she knows. And Karl! He will remember the words the character spoke. He will put two and two together and find Jill. What then? Kathy suffers again. Story of total control. They need you in iraq.

is not MY responsibility, PostScriptor, but I do hope that you are not disallusioned by the negative responses to the chapters throughout this story! The plot is well thought out, apparently researched, and much better than most of what is seen on this site. The problem with your negative critics is a lack of understanding that life is NOT lived in black and white, but in grays, and that love and commitment in marriage, deep friendship, and family ties goes far beyond revenge and/or the desolving of a committed relationship because one partner or the other makes a serious mistake in judgment, especially envolving the emotions. Well done, continue giving us good writing like this.

Not only has Kathy humiliated Paul in front of family and friends. Now Karl has knocked him on his ass. Nice revenge, I think Paul is getting off on submission. Maybe the spineless little weasel could send Karl a mean email. Kathy and him deserve each other.

The "Reconcilaition at all costs"... Morons here are once again arguing that if you dont like this story because of massive inconsitencies the YOU are at fault becuase YOU are demanding that everything is perfect.

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we see these sort of comment from some idiots that posted feedback -- see <u>Your Psyche</u> and <u>Kelcha </u> posts

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In the original story we had wife that was so morally bankrupt when she met up with her old boyfriend through work she had a long term affair and when confronted she would not stop and perfectly wiling to loves her kids/ family life over it .

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In this wretched story... the Moron husband comes with the stupidest scheme EVER seen at Literotica in order to keep Kathy but the author never explains <b> WHY.</b>

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Even after Kathy hears of his car accident and THINKS Paul was almost killed she still is more than happy to go on fucking Karl at her other place for several more months...culminating with the trip to Bermuda!

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<b> In a story like this that centers on a person as selfish self centered and morally repulsive as Kathy .... for the author to assert that Paul still claims to love her ... but does NOT explain WHAT is sooooo special about Kathy that he is willing to go through this pathetic scheme.... is KILLING this story.<b>

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This is a huge issue and some of thes readers dont see it.

I liked the story, but then I just read it as a story and not a statement on the meaning of life or the nature of true manliness. I do think that for reconciliation to be plausible something more besides hard knocks needs to be done to address Kathy's EXTREME moral stupidity and her unthinking lack of respect for her husband and family.

You've portrayed her as a "nice" woman who is so unthinkingly self-centered that she doesn't see what she's doing. She's not mean or deliberately contemptuous. She just can't imagine that people who love her wouldn't want her to have any and everything she wants. In the course of the story, she begins to get it, and she knows she's done the wrong thing by the end, but I would believe in this couple's future more if she were shown coming to grips not just with screwing up but with the shallow selfish person she has been.

I don't think you have to worry about the psyche of the author. I have a feeling he is enjoying all the controversy he has generated. It is only a story nothing more, nothing less. No surprises today, but I don't have a clue as to what tomorrow will bring.

This is chapter 13 isn't it? The same people who complained biterly about this story, but kept on reading it? I know I sometimes prattle on about wierd and wonderful things, and about marriage being a partnership between two people an d anything outside of the marriage shouldn't happen, and oh yes I don't like wimps or cucks. Well in this story correct me if i'm wrong but where is the wimp, where is the cuck, because I do not see him. What I see is an average man doing everything he can to win back his wife. And with the information given by the the writer, there was never any wife watching. Any creampie eating. No dick sucking by the husband. The bad guy got his diserved end. Although I still think a quiet word in Karls ear with a baseball bat would have helped early on. Would I have had the time to wait around for my revenge. No. I personally believe revenge should be scolding hot and very permenant. But Having said all that, this is a story nothing more. The fact he has got us all talking about this story is a testement to his writing. Okay some people don't like the content. But give credit where it is due. this story is a hundred times better than most loving wife stories. I say to the writer carry on writing. Most of us on this site like your work. But as I know you can not and will not please everybody, so don't try.

hey guys who hated that story, I take Harryin VA

as an example here (don't take it to personal but take it). Which asshole is reading a story for so long he doesn't like ? well to tell you he must be dumber than a real slut like Pam Anderson. why? well she just can't help herself can she? but writing underground comments for so long is really .... I can't find the right words. so please write your own story and make it better or just shut the fuck up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now to the story if this is the end. nice approach to make it different, not just black and white. but both main characters are a bit exaggerated (highs and lows in the character as well as in the intelligence quotient (IQ) department). the rest is good reading and nice entertainment.

I thought the writing in the story was credible. There were some places where more editorial help would've been nice but, overall, the prose is decent. I thought the characterizations were done well, and we gain a solid understanding of Kathy, Paul and Karl from their words and deeds. While we may not like some of what they do on moral grounds, the author's skill at handling the characters is unquestioned.

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With respect to the plot, I do have some questions. In my opinion, for the reconciliation to work, the marriage bonds have to be reforged because what Paul and Kathy had before did <B>not</B> work. If it didn't work before, why one assume that it would work in the future? To my way of thinking, Paul and Kathy have to find a new basis for staying together, and doing so because of the children simply isn't good enough. Without this restructuring of the marriage contract, the reconciliation doesn't work, and thus the story fails as a whole.

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I agree with capecodmercury's comments from Chapter Twelve. The revenge on Kathy and Karl doesn't make a whole lot of sense. If Paul wants a reconciliation with Kathy, giving her the clap is silly, and medically dangerous. If Paul's less-than-genius biochemist friend screws up and gives Paul an antibiotic-resistant strain of gonorhea, the tidy little package of STD humilation is no longer so tidy. And the faked gangbang pictures are way out there. When those get onto the Internet, Paul's revenge will certainly be out of control. Trashing Karl's company seems to be mostly accidental though Paul spends an awful lot of time cackling about <I>The Plan</I> like it's <I>Fall Gelb</I> or something. It's sophomoric and juvenile, and shows how shallow his character really is.

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Though it happens only rarely, in this case, I do have to agree with one sentiment that Harry expressed: what kind of magic pussy does Kathy have that makes Paul go through these machinations? That poontang must rival Helen of Troy because, <b>nobody</B> and I do mean <B>nobody</B>, would bust their hump to win back a cheating wife who abandoned her family to take up with her high school sweetheart of twenty years ago. I expected to find the answer to this greatest of mysteries, but there was none.

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Thank you, Postscriptor, for your effort. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.

Each day I was looking for the next chapter. You captured my attention. **** Did I like all of your characters? Did they act like I would? ***** While many commenting on this story seem to have that as a criteria for a good story, it doesn't matter to me. Some of the best stories I have ever read had people in them, even the protagonist, that I didn't personally like. So what, a good story is a good story. I hope you write more.

Or reconciliation, PostScript. My argument is merely that THE WAY you went about the husband forgiving the wife and the latter coming back to her family WAS NOT very believable or good or satisfactory in any serious way. <p>

SEPARATE LIVES and BACK TO BRISTOL are two WORKABLE stories on two WORKABLE forgiving's/reconcilation's; on rebuilding a shattered life, after tragedies and deceits. As you noted to me, things like these take YEARS to heal... BOTH of these mentioned stories did good treatment on that concept: it's not a sudden: <p>

"Ooops, I so sorry, dear beloved husband.... Last week flying back home from Bermuda, after a week of fun and fucking, I realized, as I turned to my old love, I wish he WERE you... I am through with him now, but I want to let you know it first, and THEN I will call him and end it officially..." <p>

In "real life," for a STORY TO BE BELIEVABLE, that is, it just don't happen, it just can't happen like that. Unless, of course, you and your lover/wife are swingers and you're just mad because she went to one swinging club without telling you the time and you missed her and the new babes and you're not too happy about it, because she got to fuck the guys and you didn't get to fuck the women. It's not a misunderstadning like that. This was a CALCULATED, cold blooded, heartless DECISION on the wife's part that after you, the husband, having loved her for 16 years, with two beautiful kids, she DECIDED on her own shortly after her former high school boyfriend's back in town, that she OUGHT TO FUCK HIM to see if her feelings for him are STILL as strong now as they were 20 years ago. <p>

What is the BASIS for trust, love, honesty, and ultimately forgiveness, when you're dealing with such a spouse? <p>

But it's not as simple as: "Well, honey, Paul, you know I love you to death; but I also have so much longing for Karl that I MUST do something about... But since I know I will hurt you either way, I will ask that you let me go; that we separate formally, so that I can pursue my hopes and dreams with this other man that I've never stop loving...." <p>

But it's not that, is it? This is a woman who, after having fucked around with another man for some months, confessed, at your insistence to know what's going on, that said to you: "I love you; but I love Karl, too. I WANT YOU BOTH. I will never divorce you; but I will never stop loving or fucking Karl, either. I will, whether you like it or not, GET AN APARTMENT, so that from now on I will not have to sneak around to be with Karl. But once a week, for a day or two, in addition to vacation and other quality time, I will be with Karl, at my apartment. But after that, I will return to you and our children, and love you like nothing has changed." <p>

THAT is the issue here. <p>

A personality like this can come to you, a year from now, and announce: "Paul, this time I think I have truly found the love of my life. He is different from you and Karl. He treats me like I want to be treated; he respects me. He SAYS HE WILL ALLOW ME TO HAVE YOU, OR ANY OTHER MAN, so long as I return to him. He's the one I really want. Now, you and I can have the arrangement I had with you, while I was with Karl, or you can have a divorce. It's up to you, but I love you to death, too." <p>

Kathy, by her actions, is THAT KIND OF A PERSON. Now, is Paul going to do these revenge things, time and again, every time Kathy has found her "real love"?, like he did this time? Why or why not? From your argument, the premise of this writing of yours, IT SEEMS like Paul will, each and every time, do these sorts of things ---- possibly infecting the boyfriend with HIV, to double make sure he truly destroy the bastard, for having coming between Kathy and him [Paul], again,,,, like the first bastard, Karl. <p>

That would really be consistent with Paul's behavior... Would you have Paul do that? <p>

So, again, it's not that many of us don't believe in forgiveness or workable reconciliation; it's just that in THIS CASE, it's too incredible, too unrealistic. <p>

Like I said before, I would have TREMENDOUS respect for Paul if he truly destroy BOTH Kathy and Karl and hurt as he is, he forges on, without turning back, finding happiness, trust, and love away from Kathy.... Again, I would hate to cross path with Paul, but I would respect him, because he is, though a decent person, CAN BE ruthless and remorseful, when you shit in his food and piss in his drinks and pretend you're his best friend.... <p>

But NOT this Paul, not the way he manufactured things to destroy two people who are actually more alike, and likely more compatible in life, than Kathy is with him/Paul... It's a good attempt. I just think Whiteone_Redone's ending was just more classic, more realistic, and more humanly and deeply bittersweet....

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I like reconciliation. Having stated that upfront, I have to say that the final reconciliation is a little lacking in repurcussions for Kathy. Paul had an opportunity to make sure Kathy understood the damage she had done when Kathy announced that she had decided that morning to dump Karl. I could envision a soliloquy by Paul that might go something like:<p><p>

<b>"Yes, I know. I spoke with your sister earlier today. While I appreciate that, you need to realize that we have a lot of work ahead of us if we are going to survive as a family. You have humiliated me as your husband, your lover and as a man. You have chosen to act in childish, self-centered, sluttish ways to the detriment not only of our marriage, but to our entire family. The fact that you contracted an STD speaks to how much you endangered your health and my health at a minimum."<p>

"If our marriage is to survive you have to understand that this was a one-time pass. I will not fight for you or forgive you again. If you so much as look at another man in a manner I deem inappropriate in the future, we are history. You very nearly destroyed me, nearly destroyed us and our family. I won't allow you to do that again. If you can't recognize and acknowledge; <ul> 1) The damage you have done,</ul><ul>2) The burden we will are bear in getting past this, but especially you, and</ul><ul>3) Your need to be very sure that nothing like this will ever happen again,</ul> then let me know and we can part as amicably as possible."<p></B>

As your story stands, I don't think Kathy really understands the damage she has done.

Lest it seem otherwise, I really enjoyed the story other than lacking that clarity in my mind. If you are going to continue finishing other people's stories, might I suggest "Ashley's New Job", by Curious2C and/or "The Worst Week of My Life", by Ohio. Both cry out for additional chapters to finish the story. It would be interesting to see your take on how they reach closure.

I like your writing skills and for the most part I liked the story. However. like some of the other readers, I think there are some loose ends that could stand to be tied up. Maybe you will consider that sometime. Anyway, I hope to see more of your work here soon. Thanks for the good read...

me , i am not sure. forgive and not forget, and end it w her. there are children, but there are alternate ways of delaing with that too

This is a masterful piece of writing and I'm certainly enjoying the revenge that the husband is achieving. I thought that remark at the confrontation with Karl to the neighbors about him stalking his wife was great. Thanks for sharing this great story with us.

WHY WOULD A MAN EVER WANT HER BACK. SHE CHEATED, TOLD OF HER LOVE FOR ANOTHER MAN, MOVED TO BE WITH THAT OTHER MAN. KEPT BOTH OF HER IRONS IN THE FIRE. ETC ETC.....HE THREW HER OUT AND NOW WANTS HER BACK. THE PAYBACK I COULD BELIEVE AND UNDERSTAND. TK U MLJ LV NV

Katy is a cheating, lying slut. Once a cheater, always a cheater. That Paul would even let her be in the same building with him begs common sense. Kick the slut to the curve, take the kids and kiss her sorry ass off.

No f'ing way, once a cheater always a cheater. How do you say it... WILLING CUCKOLD.

First off how in the world can the husband still be able to have sex/make love to this disgusting, lying, dirty slut? I really don't see what he was fighting for, first off if you have to fight to prove you love her More or she's yours-- she NEVER was really yours... She showed a total lack of compassion, love & concern.. She's a slut! What happens when another ex-boyfriend comes into town again? How many years is the wimpy cum drinking loser husband going to fight for a slut that's not worth it? The tricks /plan to keep her from having her "Karl time" is outrageous why the fuck should a husband have to go through all of this bullshit because the slut wife can't keep her legs close? What type of man is OK with his wife completely disrespecting him? This isn't a marriage --shit it's not even love! What sort of role models is the husband to his children, what type of example is he setting for his sons & daughter? That it's ok to let someone you love & cherished shit on the life you've built together as long as they feed you a bunch of bullshit & gives you some used up pussy? I hate to see the example the slut is setting for her own daughters... The husband should be shot! There's no way he can positively say the dirty whore is going to keep her legs close unless he's willing to sew her pussy & asshole shut that's the only way I see the slut being faithful.. She took her marriage for granted... No woman would have respect for a man who'd allow her to fuck some other guy because she loves him too.. I know ! I'm a woman & I'm married! This story is a bunch of crap... She's gonna cheat again because now she knows her spineless good for nothing wimpy husband won't divorce her... Wow...yeah the wimp destroyed "Karl" but "The wimpy husbands anger is really aim at the wrong person yeah he deserve some of the blame he had no business sleeping with a married woman but -- Karl didn't owe the husband anything! Karl is not the one who stood in church in front of god, friends & family promising to love, honor & cherish forsaking all others... The Slut KATHY did! Her punishment should've been losing her husband, kids, house & job.... Why was the tramp allowed to keep husband, kids & house? Where's the remorse from the slut? Where's the promise of never cheating again? She will cheat again.... Thank god this is fiction..... The two losers deserve each other a slut & a wimp... Perfect

PS, kudos for such a brilliant plot twist! I still have to read the comments for Chp 13 but first I want to put on a welding mask and gloves cause the anonymousie trolls will have to drop their little wee-wees to be burning up their keyboards in their vitriolic screeching. I bet their Mommies will be down to yell at them about their cacophonous tantrums!

"....and I know that she loves you and your kids more than anything."

Oh, and she proves it by fucking an old boyfriend behind her husbands back and not only that, but says she is going to continue and she hopes ol' Paul will be good with it and THAT shows how much she loves him?

With love like that, who needs it? I'd take an enemy over that ANY DAY.

But great writing and a fantastic story!

The bitch wife must have a hell of a body! How do you get unfucked?

I think the term here is RACC. Truly sad state of affairs

and expect them to provide a time out and forgiveness, TK U MLJ LNV

I can't say much for this as an attempt to "straighten out" the faults in another writer's story. I don't see how in the world anyone could expect their spouse to sanction an open liaison with an old lover. Also how could the wife be so cruel to her husband to put that kind of thing in his face, then leave to enjoy the lover while he worked full time, took care of the house and took care of the kids. Then she comes back like it's her due. I think that she is a seriously flawed individual. But the fact she was HR director fit really well with her attitude and implied intelligence. She evidently didn't even know her own HR rules about moral and ethics clauses in all of their contracts as well as those spelled out in the employee handbook. Infidelity is probably in all caps in the book.

Then, of course, there are her children that she had been ignoring for "the dick from Christmas past". How do you rationalize that? I think that she is a waste of space, a waste of oxygen resources and too stupid to have actually reproduced. Hopefully she was impregnated by space aliens because the husband really shouldn't have been left fertile after puberty. We have enough girly-men running around, don't need another one reproducing. Taking her back did not make him out to be a strong individual, it made him look weak and conniving.

"I don't know how you can believe anything that I tell you anymore, Paul,"

....I don't, Kathy. I think you are a lowlife scumbag that is the dredges of humanity. I think you are a liar, a cheater and a manipulator of the highest caliber. I think that you should be incarcerated, or at the very least, chained to a wall until you've died of malnutrition.

Cunt.

but just as with so many previous chapters the outcome does not follow from the text.

If anyone should fight in court it would be Kathy. She was fired for association with a contractor. she did not grant the contract. her background check was not in question. there was no proof of her leaking documents. don't get me wrong, she was wrong to sleep with Karl. It was wrong for her to try to force Paul to accept her lover. but those things are not fire-able offences for her employment. Another very week point in her being fired is the mole. Jill is aware of everything, and if anyone were to check, they would find the e-mails she sent.

Her untimely recognition of the error of her ways was too little too late and Paul is a fool for taking her back and bringing her into his new company.

but, one more thing just does not ring true in the text. Karl, after looking at the phony pictures says:

". . . That was her fucking apartment; the real reason that it was 'off limits . . . '

to which I have to ask, IF, the apartment was 'off limits', how did he recognize it from pictures taken inside? We are not talking about a view into the living room from the front door, the pictures Paul had doctored were taken in the bedroom.

This is RAAC, it's totally WACC to the tenth degree. Why would he want a cheating whore back. This was nothing more than a pamphlet on how to get your husband to cuckold himself freely.

Like anyone capable of doing what he did to get rid of the one his wife was fucking behind his back would take someone like her back.

You are what you choose to be.

No, people with spine evaluate and move on if warranted.

It's irritating when writers make people with principals and backbone willing number twos.

Or think its plausible.

1. Kathy mighty have fought her termination. It's not a firing if you leave voluntarily for family reasons, but demotion, uncomfortable working conditions, and an ever vigilant management can be 99% sure to get rid of unwanted employees without union representation or legal protection (sexual harassment whistle blowers and others protected by federal or state law), not to mention the humiliation of the office rumor mill.

2. It was said near the beginning, it was a 1 time aberration, totally unlikely to be repeated caused by one emotional incident in her past.

3. He got his pound of flesh, make that his 10 pounds of flesh.

4. He still loves her, somewhat, and her bedroom behavior and gratitude for not tossing her out will probably keep her under his thumb, pliable and playable for ever after.

5. She's good in bed - with him.

6. He needs an office manage and what better way to keep an eye on her than to be her boss.

7. The clap is treatable, ask any army medic or navy corpsman.

All in all an unusually twisty BTB story. I surely wouldn't want him mad at me!

Great job PostScriptor.

DHL

How insane has a man to be to think that a slut will morph into a faithful spouse??!! A cheater is a cheater and will stay a cheater!!! But the same go for cuckolds and idiots they will stay as such!!!

That was almost as good as killing him. Killing his soul, I love it.

A vengeful cuck but a cuck nonetheless who figuratively drank gallons of Karl's cum along with his cuck sauce.

Not a bad cuck and whore story but it certainly fits the cum sucking cuck category with a good dash of vengeance on the bull.

1 she put him second and he accepted

2 she was married to him but continued to cheat with boyfriend

3 he got revenge but accepted only becoming first after she tired of boyfriend

4 total length of being cuckolded and length after he knew

Wimpy Cucky wins

Despite the vehement protestations that the hero is just another cuck, I disagree. This was a thoughtful and well-rounded story, very well-written and intelligently planned.

If he had kicked her out: they win, he loses

If he had simply left her: they win, he loses

If he destroyed each of them: he wins, they lose.

It's that simple.

The bad guy ends up 'knowing' that his dream girl was actually a whore, a slut with a perversion for BBC and a nasty knack of picking up STDs and getting him put out of business and back to work with a pick and shovel.

The bad wife ends up 'knowing' that her dream man was actually a cheating, lying, violent psycho, who wasn't anywhere near as good in bed as the hero, and that this fantasy love of her youth had a nasty knack of picking up STDs.

The hero ends up 'knowing' that the woman he loved was now as much a Stepford Wife as he cared to make her, who would never dare even to dream of thinking about another man for the rest of their lives, and who was ever-ready and willing to give him pretty much any fantasy he cared to mention.

So it took a little work and a lot of heartache. So what? In the end he got exactly what he wanted - revenge, and a wife he loved whom he never needed to worry about ever again, who knew absolutely that her slightest indiscretion would see her world turn into a ball of shit.

A harsh lesson for all three of them, but the hero at least got what he wanted most out of it in the end! He loved and wanted her. So he wins! And I guess she got what she really wanted too, after all the harsh lessons got her ass handed to her and she learned some real consequences.

Great series. This guy is no cuck. He was a puppet master in complete control of everything and everyone. He must really love Kathy to take her back.

Good story, but he could never trust her again. Her character was way too immature even for her supposed age in her marriage.

Im not fan of stories when the husband is ok with his wife having a lover but this one has me hooked. I like that he is fighting for his wife and family even though I think the whore doesn't deserve it. The only thing I wish would of happened, is if the husband punished her more like having some sort of revenge sex or separating for a bit. She got off way to lightly and generally when there is little consequence to a hurtful action, people will feel free to do it again.

Why does the cheating wife have it easy? It takes 2 to tango, and between karl and kathy, kathy is the one who has more at fault. At least karl didn't promise fidelity to paul. Kathy on the otherhand did. It was kathy who betrayed her husband. Karl is merely the snake in the garden. If the husband see fit to give a punch the interloper, i think its fair to give the cheating wife 2.

There are many "karl"s in the world, but to a husband there's only one wife. Unless he's a muslim.

Fantastic "rest of the story"!!!!!!

5***** if the author was still permitting voting. o the other Anons who are butt hurt, Paul ratfucked Karl, he slapped wifey around hard emotionally and there is still another chapter to go. But whatever he does in the next chapter, he rather comprehensively BTB Karl and to a lesser but still significant extent Kathy.

That was some pretty pathetic dialogue.

It was getting better because he was having sex with her even though she would then go have sex with the guy she was cheating with.

He was going closer while she was going from his bed to her lovers bed .

Another cuck hubby with misplaced anger.. once again the cuck is more angry at the man than he is with his cum slut. She willingly went to Karl, eagerly spread her legs for Karl, she had no problem sitting on her husband, their marriage, their dreams. She wasn't forced. She thought she was in love with Karl. How fuck'd up is that?. Where was her consequences? She gets to keep her happy life?. The consequences should've been she gets Karl. He was about to slap the shit out of her... she disrespected and betrayed her husband for a man that was about to hit her... she would've been kicking her own ass after the divorce. I just don't get this story. I just don't like this story. I kept reading hoping he'd finally get some self respect and just dump the dirty slut. But nope.... I'm glad I skipped a few chapters. I don't think I would've been able to stomach anymore of this bullshit

I dont get why when a cheating involved, often the 3rd person got burnt, when it was the 2nd person who made a vow. The 2rd person only needs to cry and say "I love you!", and that's it.

Kathy is just too big a piece of shit to cheer for Paul.

Still not sure what kind of man wants to live with a cheating whore. I’m done with this author. Too bizarre.