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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice idea, but dodgy writing, poor punctuation and editing

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I'm mature and longtime happily married. I started to write erotic fiction in the begining of Feb 2018 after reading it for a few years on e-books, and thought I have enough ideas I could write like this,then found this site and a few others of the same so had the incentive to...