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All Comments on 'Swallow’s Nest Ch. 01'

by Serena_Dare

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gapster7gapster7about 4 years ago

Great set-up. I hope you’re inspired to write more chapters now. Keep it up!!

CreepyDragonCreepyDragonabout 4 years ago
Great story!

When I read the title and then the synopsis I was like, "Oh great, another story about a woman being rescued into a Dom/sub relationship. But then the twist! Took me by surprise and now I can't wait to see how Bridget handles her new job and her new clients.

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Just a note...

The CIA does not have domestic law enforcement capabilities. That would be the FBI. Otherwise you have a good premise to start with.

Mark_44Mark_44about 4 years ago
Great Setup!

I really hope you keep going on this one! Could be really fun!

GothicmonGothicmonabout 4 years ago

Very good beginning. I'm anxious for part 2 ,3,4,....

Dark358Dark358over 1 year ago

Pity that you didn't pursue this. Your profile is compelling enough for me to wonder how your mind would have seen this story line through.

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Current philosophy major with a minor in English. Always loved to read other people’s stories. Hope I can make some other people happy with stories of my own. Apart from reading and writing stories, I love to play RP on Lit Chat. I like playing as fairly submissive, but I'm o...