All Comments on 'Swap & Discover Ch. 03'

you wil getting bored with the old pelikan - he cant help himself -

o,bounde admiration and affevtion for the person behind the srories - who rather reveals quite much of herself -

Ah - if I were only 20 years younger - thank you one again - do come back to your writing machine - ^lease

not your best - too professional - you arent that good as far as I know of your work - at projecting yourself into the man's role -

thanks again for a lovely piece of work - very sensitively handled

This last chapter was alot better than the second i think Jeff was better with marion than his wife Susan she expected jeff to please him where marion was more undersatanding willing to show him and tell him what pleased her i would like to read more and see how jeff does with his next swap.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Much more please Susan McK

Please think about using a substitute for "realise." We can always tell a Brit author because it's used in every other sentence. You had the opportunity to have hubby be tutored in love making, either by wifey or the other women. It would have been educational also to your readers. I like the woman's perspective stories.

I guess, l was waiting for more and also wanted to see is Susan's and Jeff sex life improved and that Susan was honest with her experiences including the first time she let her first swing take her virgin ass.

Sick of reading your half finished stories

Swap & Discover was a fun series. Every appearance of being true. The reality of not everything being true resonates well. Thank you for sharing. Glad to see you writing again. Hope you continue.

I enjoyed this story as I did your previous ones. I hope that there more chapters of their story in the future.