All Comments on 'Sweaty, Sticky Night Ch. 01'

Your writing is amazing passionate sensual and erotic .

Thanks so much

Michael age 67

Another sensual and erotic story told in such a way that a person feels as if they were there. A person can als most smell the passion in that room.

LOVED this story so much!!!!!!

Hot Hot Hot!!!! I have to start reading it again and finish what I started.

God you have such a wicked mind to writ this story. To say it was hot would be an understatement. If there was ice here, it surely would have melted. Thank you.

Can't wait for chapter 2. Very erotic.

another wonderful story! You are truly gifted, and please keep writing

This was brilliant! An amazing job of limited first person narrative.

I suppose the jerky, jerky boys didn’t understand it, but those of us with literary acumen truly appreciate your effort.

"I felt something pumping out of me. Liquid. Spraying all over daddy's arm........"

You pissed on him or are you just perpetuating the usual squirting BS?

It spoiled what could have been a pretty good story.

I liked it. It felt quite real as I am in that part of the world myself at the moment. Temps. forecast of 80 plus degrees in November!! Ridiculous.

Love it! Good pacing, nice imagery. Sensual.

I will read anything you write!

I felt the heat. No greater love than a girl for her dad…except maybe a mom for son :)

Very hot!!!

It’s ten degrees at the moment but I am sweating after reading this.

Nice job! Great tension building

Just found your stories. All very exciting. All made me very excited. Thankyou. I’m looking forward to reading more.

As I wrote ...I knew you wold not have dissapointed me ... love the way your brain knows how to work the sensuality up on how reads your stories... great writing

Is there going to be part two?? I would love to read the next chapter

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, you nasty lil girl, really?!!

SO FUCKING HARD & WET FOR PART II

AWESOME TALE. YUMMY!!!

You wrote this in 2022 almost a year ago. I want part two now! 5-stars

Ahh, hello!! I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to write chapter 2 for this yet. I always meant to, but I got sidetracked with several other story projects I've been working on. I'll try to get to this, though!

★★★★★★ out of 5 ☆ !!! Amazing narrative, very visual, true erotica for the mind... "Brain Porn", is that a thing? With future Chapters, please keep it as Ellie telling the story! Don't hop back and forth from daddy to daughter POV. But would love to have a bunch more in this series.

The way you write these stories it makes me think you may have first-hand experience with taboo naughty things baby God you make me hot with your sexy writings

Wowww ... what a great story ... MORE than 5 stars ... So sensual, erotic, slow and with words very well picked. Please go on. Can't wait for more of your stories to come ... Thanks for sharing ..

☆Happy 🎶 New Year to my favorite NastyGirl writer, Ever!

May your year be Lit with love, laughter and smut for all.

You Are Amazing!!!☆☆☆☆☆☆

Just wanted to pop in here and let you guys know that Chapter 02 is FINALLY coming for this story! It's already submitted, so now I'm just waiting for it to be reviewed and published. :)

Plus... I already have two more chapters to come soon after!

(And another couple stories that I'm working on, too...)

Stunning. I found this after your posted Part 2. Now to read that. 5*

Incredibly hot and also plausible like so many of your stories..Love that she’s small breasted and he has biggish pecs, almost like they could wear the same bra…knowing that she’s getting herself off, so so hot for daddy….so many possibilities..Keep going!

JT

Thank you, thank you, thank you. You don't know how much I needed this right now!

Saving part 2 for later tonight!