All Comments on 'Sweet Android'

I would love to hear more about what happens to Jack and Sam.

Excellent space tale, five stars! Yes please more of Jack's adventure with her robot.

PS, this is a great first story!

"Mo Mo Mo"

Please more. And great writing by the way, we really appreciate someone who understands how to tell a story well.

This was so awesome. I loved everything about this. The characters are incredible, the sex is incredible, the descriptions are incredible!! You're an incredible writer overall and great at writing this sort of stuff. I would LOVE to hear more of this story!!

Absolutely magnificent. Flawless writing (aside from a few homophone goofs) and exceptionally hot. Welcome to Lit, Alizzia. Please keep writing! <3

I want more Jack.

I have a sweet spot for this story, thank you and I'd be silly not to want to see more of them omg

I really dislike the use of androgynous character names, and it seems to be a "thing" here on Lit. I experienced a MASSIVE stroke a few years ago, and apparently, took a "hit" to whatever area of the brain remembers names and faces. This causes me no end of trouble in the Real World, and also while watching films or television, but is even more of an issue while reading, where there are no visual cues or clues to help in identifying which character is saying or doing what. That means that character names (as well as pronouns) are HUGELY important in helping me follow what's going on in a story. So, with the gender-neutral names of "Jack" and "Sam", even a two-character scene or story becomes difficult for me to follow. So, EVERY SINGLE TIME either of your characters' names is mentioned, My brain gets sidetracked ("Okay, WHICH one is Sam again?") if only for an instant, making it very difficult to remain "immersed" in the tale.

Other than that, I'm enjoying it immensely!

-Rei

Really great story, except for the use of Jack for the female. It's VERY distracting. Try this. Ask ten people at random if Jack and Sam sounds like a girl and a guy and listen to the responses. I loved the story but try to pick names for your characters that are easier to be identified by gender. Thank you so much for your talent and creativity.